A Taste of Kirklin's Work

Take me off of autopilot, cause I stare into the atmosphere,
I'm living life and getting strikes and pretty soon I'm outta here,
you got me twisted like a broken stick that you kept messing with,
and if I die I hope that I can convince God to let me in,
I'm open to your point of view, but closed for ever in a hole,
I can get a grasp of things, but I can never get control,
an answer can be answered, but a question stays a question,
my anger turns from silence into pain and then depression,
this is just a poem about how I make my poems perfect,
They're so deep, but now I think it's time to head back to the surface!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 6, 2010 at 9:10 AM
LOL good one too....a serpent eating its own tail! Light & Love
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July 1, 2010 at 10:02 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed reading your creative wirte tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..AlohA..
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July 1, 2010 at 9:33 PM
wow,, this write is really good,, I like the first line,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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