A Tangled Mess

A Tangled Mess You make a tangled mess when you deceive and have to tell a lie upon a lie to change beliefs that someone else perceives. You want to end the ruse and so you try to tell them everything and start anew and have to tell a lie upon a lie. It would be nice to just admit what’s true although it might hurt someone to the bone to tell them everything and start anew. You think it would be easier by phone, admitting truth to have the tangle solved although it might hurt someone to the bone. You know deep within you’re not evolved and that you have no guts to see this through, admitting truth to have the tangle solved. You know that this confusion will not do. You make a tangled mess when you deceive and that you have no guts to see this through to change beliefs that someone else perceives. 8/26/17

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Date: 12/10/2017 5:33:00 AM
Truth will solve that tangled web...Very nicely done Janis...Thank you and Congrats on your win
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/10/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for the placement Joseph and yes, truth is a badly needed solution. Great contest idea.
Date: 12/9/2017 7:26:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/10/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 8/29/2017 12:50:00 AM
Lies do create tangles, Janis, great terzanelle:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/10/2017 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Jo.
Date: 8/28/2017 5:27:00 PM
Amen, this poem rocks, Janis! I love truth-telling poetry ... this is upfront and gritty. Truth to power to truth times two. This amen is a witness that the words you wrote are living proof to the truth. Star bright poetry! Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/26/2017 8:32:00 PM
So very true, Janis, it is the hardest thing to tell the truth.. No one wants to look like a fool :( ,, nice write enjoyed reading.
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:45:00 PM
Yes, that is a tangled mess Janis. Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/26/2017 5:19:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 8/26/2017 4:44:00 PM
Great write, I'd rather know the truth from the start, it's easier that way :)
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Date: 8/26/2017 5:19:00 PM
Yes, we are better off. Thanks, Debbie.
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