A Talk In the Park

I’d been flat out writing poetry for nigh on near a week,
and I felt it’s time to try and clear me head,
so I put the dog upon the leash to walk down near the creek,
where I can feel a touch of nature here instead.

I sat down on a park bench and then let the dog run free,
and watched him scamper up and down the grass,
then I gave a subtle grin when he christened every tree,
as a pair of aging fellows walked on pass.

We gave our curt ‘hello’s before the pair of them sat down,
beside me on a bench to take a rest,
they said that they were living at a centre close to town,
for the invalid and aged they both confessed.

Now their names are Jack and Horry, and neither has a car,
their constitution is to walk here every day,
I asked them where they came from, and how old they are,
Jack was quick to cut in with his say.

Jack mentioned that he’s eighty-three but sprightly no he’s not,
he’s got arthritis, aching back; a touch of gout,
he finds it hard to sleep at night, and he feels he’s lost the plot, 
Horry mentioned Jack is buggered without doubt.

So I turned and faced old Horry who is wincing just a mite
and asked him how he’s feeling just by chance,
Horry drawled, “I feel just like a baby”, so I added, “That’s all right”  …
“Yep, I have no hair or teeth - and I just wet me pants”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/29/2018 12:14:00 PM
If we can keep the humor in old age we should just be fine. Never know what will happen when we get there. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/3/2018 7:40:00 PM
G'day Phyllis … this talk is easy to imagine what goes on between the elderly who enjoy humour - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 9/10/2018 1:27:00 PM
Horry Bull? Still crying for his ma? Some things never change! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:46:00 PM
Hello Rico … in the beginning and in the end we are the same, however, in between is the adventures of life - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 9/9/2018 1:47:00 PM
To have old age in common with a friend means you can both laugh at the stresses ld age brings with it. I enjoyed your relatable poem my friend! : )
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2018 10:44:00 PM
Hello Connie … I truly do enjoy the sense of humour and stories of those in their eighties. The time they grew up in has no resemblance to today - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Date: 9/7/2018 7:27:00 AM
As long as you keep your sense of humor, you have kept the best sense. Old age can also be true love--for those who have learned what really matters. Great read, Lindsay. Your poem made a brighter day for me. Blessings!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2018 10:41:00 PM
Hello Joe … enjoyed your comment Mate. All true - and pleased that I brightened up your day - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2018 11:48:00 PM
Funny! Old age is not for sissies!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2018 10:39:00 PM
G'day Timothy … I'd like to think old age is for everyone, but there's no guarantees. Aged folk are great to chat with too - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2018 4:33:00 PM
Nobody knows old like the old timers my friend!!..Very well written and rhymed....80)
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2018 10:31:00 PM
G'day Pat … correct - thanks for the comment Pat. Aged people have a great sense of humour in their stories - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2018 10:30:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, Old age is certainly not for sissy's. a sharp reminder, our time is still coming. Lovely flow of words. xoxo
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2018 10:28:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … thanks for your encouraging comment. With old age once you're there, others have to get there - thanks Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2018 7:42:00 AM
My very talented friend, this one cheered me something fierce this morn. Ending was icing on this very creative cake!! A fav....
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:26:00 PM
G'day Robert … pleased you enjoyed another little bit of my silliness, although aged people can laugh at themselves - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2018 4:45:00 AM
Old age sucks for sure, once past forty bits start to drop off. Tom
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:23:00 PM
Hello Tom … one good think about old blokes Tom; they have a great sense of humour to compensate for their ailments - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2018 3:58:00 AM
I can picture them, and you, and your doggie. A cheer for this uplifting saga!
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:21:00 PM
Hello Caren … I would say it's a common and peaceful sight. Of course it's hard to beat old folks humour - thanks Caren - Lindsay
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