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A TALE THAT NEVER ENDS barefoot on the beach they hold hands amid moonbeams I do said the two their joints scream some pain tango is their most love dance oldies but goodies gray streaks kissed her hair unmoved, he caressed her face will death end their tale? _______________________ © 06:23 pm-- February 06, 2015

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Date: 3/24/2015 6:29:00 PM
oh my this one moves into the future and the sadness of death approaching. Well done. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:28:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2015 3:24:00 PM
A tale of never ending love. I believe that death will strengthen the tie between them! Congratulations on this lovely win of yours Olive_eloi! I see that Scottish muse is flying high! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:22:00 AM
Hahaha yes His Scottish muse is flying and so the Maltese, Filipino, American, etc. etc,. muses are flying on soup!! yey!... :D! hugs and hugs!
Date: 3/22/2015 1:44:00 PM
OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:37:00 PM
Heavens no. I think they'll be together forever. Beautiful.
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Date: 3/3/2015 4:12:00 AM
thank you M. L. Kiser.. :)@
Date: 2/20/2015 8:15:00 PM
I like what you did here. I had seen this same picture before at someone else's poem but reading your set, i realized It was not the same one i had commented to before. You are just using the picture for your own poetry. GREAT idea because it is a fun picture.
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Date: 2/26/2015 11:03:00 AM
thanks Andie.. :) this a latevreply...God bless you..
Date: 2/12/2015 1:31:00 PM
Wow! it's a perfect poem with the words of invaluable gems. "oldies but goodies" surely and their death will end their tale surely too. Beautifully done with a beautiful picture. Simply i feel 7+ here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 2/20/2015 8:22:00 AM
thanks much BL it's nice to see around here again. :)
Date: 2/11/2015 1:48:00 AM
This is so beautiful and touching poem! I love the way it flows!Great job!
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Date: 2/18/2015 8:01:00 AM
thanks nuvh kababayan gor taking tine to syop by and read my poem and more leave a comment.. :(
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Date: 2/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
Keep it up kababayan! have a great day! More smiles.. Mel :)
Date: 2/8/2015 10:52:00 AM
beautifully painted haiku olive excellent pen
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Date: 2/18/2015 8:00:00 AM
thanks much Liam.. I so appreciatr your visits
Date: 2/7/2015 11:21:00 PM
Loved this, sooo beautiful
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:43:00 AM
thank you Buddy Art for your soooo beautiful comment.. :)
Date: 2/7/2015 2:06:00 PM
In life, we all wish for a tale to never end. It's within the life of the tale, to never let it descend, and let it live, and allow to let it be, release it free, thankfully. Powerful in life Haiku Olive, good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:42:00 AM
thanks James...:) indeed it is within persons invoved tyat makes a tale a lasting one... :)
Date: 2/7/2015 8:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the passage of love in these very emotive lines..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting..Sara
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:38:00 PM
Thank you Sara.. :) I like your drop bys too... :) GBU hugs
Date: 2/6/2015 1:46:00 PM
Sounds eternal to me.. This touched my heart!
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:32:00 AM
you touched my heart too Dave each time I read your poems.. :)
Date: 2/6/2015 8:08:00 AM
beautiful and envious love... a winning poem... best wishes n hugs, nad! 7
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:29:00 AM
thanks much NAdiya,.. :D
Date: 2/6/2015 6:17:00 AM
Oh this tale will never end Olive olé olé ...well done...God bless >>>>rajat
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:28:00 AM
thanks much Rajat :D
Date: 2/6/2015 5:05:00 AM
oh so charming Olive - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:40:00 PM
thanks Jan.. :)! weeeeeee :D!
Date: 2/6/2015 5:04:00 AM
- Love it my friend, Olive !!!! (a big 7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:39:00 PM
thanks much Anne Lise.. :)! glad you like this.. :)! weeeee