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A TALE THAT NEVER ENDS

barefoot on the beach
they hold hands amid moonbeams
I do said the two

their joints scream some pain 
tango is their most love dance
oldies but goodies

gray streaks kissed her hair
unmoved, he caressed her face
will death end their tale?

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06:23 pm-- February 06, 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2015 6:29:00 PM

oh my this one moves into the future and the sadness of death approaching. Well done. Congrats for the win.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 3:28:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2015 3:24:00 PM

A tale of never ending love. I believe that death will strengthen the tie between them! Congratulations on this lovely win of yours Olive_eloi! I see that Scottish muse is flying high! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 6:22:00 AM

Hahaha yes His Scottish muse is flying and so the Maltese, Filipino, American, etc. etc,. muses are flying on soup!! yey!... :D! hugs and hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:44:00 PM

OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/27/2015 2:37:00 PM

Heavens no. I think they'll be together forever. Beautiful.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/3/2015 4:12:00 AM

thank you M. L. Kiser.. :)@

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2015 8:15:00 PM

I like what you did here. I had seen this same picture before at someone else's poem but reading your set, i realized It was not the same one i had commented to before. You are just using the picture for your own poetry. GREAT idea because it is a fun picture.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/26/2015 11:03:00 AM

thanks Andie.. :) this a latevreply...God bless you..

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/12/2015 1:31:00 PM

Wow! it's a perfect poem with the words of invaluable gems. "oldies but goodies" surely and their death will end their tale surely too. Beautifully done with a beautiful picture. Simply i feel 7+ here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/20/2015 8:22:00 AM

thanks much BL it's nice to see around here again. :)

Mel Dicdican

Date: 2/11/2015 1:48:00 AM

This is so beautiful and touching poem! I love the way it flows!Great job!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/18/2015 8:01:00 AM

thanks nuvh kababayan gor taking tine to syop by and read my poem and more leave a comment.. :(

Mel Dicdican
Date: 2/11/2015 1:54:00 AM

Keep it up kababayan! have a great day! More smiles.. Mel :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/8/2015 10:52:00 AM

beautifully painted haiku olive excellent pen

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/18/2015 8:00:00 AM

thanks much Liam.. I so appreciatr your visits

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/7/2015 11:21:00 PM

Loved this, sooo beautiful

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/18/2015 7:43:00 AM

thank you Buddy Art for your soooo beautiful comment.. :)

James Fraser

Date: 2/7/2015 2:06:00 PM

In life, we all wish for a tale to never end. It's within the life of the tale, to never let it descend, and let it live, and allow to let it be, release it free, thankfully. Powerful in life Haiku Olive, good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/18/2015 7:42:00 AM

thanks James...:) indeed it is within persons invoved tyat makes a tale a lasting one... :)