A Tale of Two 'Tweens

Two boys in their 'tweens 
Around the time of 1915
Had jobs and chores at home
Couldn't just run and roam

One Saturday when in town
Saw an ad  the circus 
Was coming around
Saved their pennies

Did some work
Couldn't wait to see
What was possible quirks
Thrilled with excitement

When the time came around
Wanted to go all day to town
Around lunch dad said could go
They ran to all the way to show

Longingly waited in the line
Wondering what on the inside
They would finally find
Inside the huge tent

Found seats prefectly fixed
Comfortable in there place
Never knew would have to race
Outside in a heated pace

To be saved from terrible harm
The show had started excitement
Built, someone in the bleachers
Some liquor spilled

Another person who just as careless
Threw down a match that was what set it
Someone yelled fire as the tent went 
Up in flames and the 'tweens

Went jumping, running
Saving their skin
Looking back over their 
Shoulder as they ran

Both hit the brick wall
Of the local dry good store
Knocked flat out pulled
Away from the fire

By some passerby
Lived to tell about it
On another day 
I was glad they were alive that I say

(This is based on a true story that my father told me of this happening to him and his 
brother in Concord around 1912 up to 1915.  They were both just before being a teen ager 
or very early teens.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/8/2009 5:06:00 AM
i don't know if i should laugh or cry. and i suppose they were the clumsy guys? / it is just a shame that love is such a rare thing. even though so many are looking.
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Date: 9/6/2009 11:21:00 AM
Great story Sara! The picture was so clear! ~Jen~
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Date: 9/6/2009 8:24:00 AM
Lovely story Sara, i could picture them running and everything>>James
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:26:00 AM
You have away with vignettes Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 9/5/2009 8:22:00 PM
It had to be Sara, We wouldn't have you , here at poetry soup. Look at the beautiful writes we would be missing. God bless you, I appreciate you, so very much. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:57:00 PM
I agree with Raul!...cool story! Sara!..thanks for sharing with us!..jim
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:05:00 PM
Compelling and wonderful...Raul
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