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A Tale of Meraki

A tale of meraki Overcome by the burden she sat teary eyed Holding closely her two little boys by her side Immersed in sorrow they had endlessly cried After her loving husband had suddenly died. Soaring from her seat elated with newfound joy, Making herself a promise with an assured ploy, She picked up her two boys holding them high Shedding ambivalence boldly with assertive sigh. Dedicating bravely to parenting with rigor, Fighting ingress of despair with almighty vigor, She crushed hindrances powered by love alone, Aiming meraki resolutely to reach her throne. As the boys grew older she faced new struggle With eagle-eyes she kept them out of trouble, Enamored in plans for sending them to college, Guiding them to yearn for power of knowledge. Not retreating when incurable illness struck, Refusing to surrender to randomness of luck, Amid doctor's visits she kept working at her job As if nothing sublunary would cause her to stop. Her kids grew up to be intelligent young men Finding success in college with power of pen, Earning scholarships for duration of all terms, Getting job offers from many reputable firms. Having reached destination of her ardent trip She embraced her kids with a joyous firm grip, Longing to hold fervently till they reach their prime, Knowing well she'll be dead in a very short time. December 15, 2017 Meraki Sponsor: Silent One Placed 2nd
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George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 8:47 PM
What a wonderful tale of bereavement and endurance...! She braced the storms of life for the sake of her children. Endured illness and vexations of life and bravely worked for a living and anchored her life boat safely ashore ! Lovely story and lovely penning...Vijay
Gauthier Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Belated congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.
Roper Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 11:42 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Thank you Eve.
Callus Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 4:42 AM
This is a meraki of love, passion and strength of character, Vijay. Very uplifting. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 5:36 AM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your visit and lovely comments.
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Glad to see you on the winner list. I do remember this sweet meraki for sure!! Congrats, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Scars Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 10:07 AM
beautiful poem der Vijay, congrats :)-luloo
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Laura..appreciate your visit and comments.
Schiavina Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations Vijay! Another masterpiece and will deserved win.
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Frances.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations Vijay on your win with a beautiful narrative verse.
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 10:11 PM
Back with congratulations :) xomo!
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thank you Maureen.
Y. Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Canerdy Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Excellent, uplifting story told in well-written lines, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Thank you Janice.
One Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Vijay the contest was about what is your meraki my friend... however this is a wonderful story and it rhymes very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the meraki contest..
Pandit Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Thanks Silent One.
Y. Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:40 PM
WoW! Vijay, You have penned a powerful and heartfelt write. Your passion on being a mother speakes loud and clear. This moving write touched me to the core and brought tears to my eyes. Barbra Streisand singing "If I Could" went perfect with this write(Prior to hearing this I only heard Regina Bell's version of the song). In my eyes you got yourself a winner.Is this a true story? Best wishes- Alexis
Y. Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 5:49 PM
What a written poem. Good write from a woman's perspective. It seemed so real. I have written several poems from a male's perspective:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Alexis..no this is fiction. Written from a mother's perspective but I am a man. Thanks for your comments Alexis.
S     Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 11:44 AM
A very beautiful write Vijay. Such dedication is admirable. Best of luck in the contest!!
Pandit Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Judy...always enjoy reading your comments.
Williams Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 2:43 AM
A very powerful woman indeed, she let nothing stand in her way. Amazing write Vijay, you are a master story teller. This one has Winner stamped all over it, but good luck just the same....Maria
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Many thanks Maria---appreciate your visit and comments.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 8:00 PM
wow, what a GREAT way to do that challenge. It makes mine look quite frivolous (not yet posted). Sure to score high, Vijay. This is the kind of mother who makes great sacrifice. I wonder if I could have been that woman had I been single.
Pandit Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate your comments.
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Uplifting, wonderful write Vijay, best wishes in the contest...
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Many thanks Charlie--appreciate your comments.
Ashley Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Vijay, your beautiful write of this heroic Mom's struggles and determination strums my heartstrings in a sad but beautiful way. A powerful yet tender poem of maternal (lioness) love and devotion. Best wishes for a win, but already a winner with me my friend!
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Susan for your vote of confidence..appreciate your detailed comments..always enjoy reading your feedback.
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 2:17 PM
- A mother after my heart ... wonderfully written, Vijay - She has sacrificed EVERYTHING - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..always happy to read your comments.
Sands Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:13 AM
A powerful written poem that really reaches the reader. Very special Vijay. Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Appreciate your support Heidi...many thanks.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Wonderful pen Vijay! A wonderful mother. My best to you! xomo :)
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Maureen--appreciate your support.
Pett Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 8:23 AM
This is absolutely brilliant Vijay, GL in contest, a winner for me. :))
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Enjoyed reading your comments..thank you Roy.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Hope you win! Well written. Grabs the heart!
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Thank you Kim..appreciate your comments.
Michael Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 7:11 AM
A wonderful woman in this poem...A powerhouse of love and dedication... A lovely poem Vijay... I always loved Babar, super talented...
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Thank you my friend..appreciate your comments.
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