A Tale of Meraki

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A tale of meraki Overcome by the burden she sat teary eyed Holding closely her two little boys by her side Immersed in sorrow they had endlessly cried After her loving husband had suddenly died. Soaring from her seat elated with newfound joy, Making herself a promise with an assured ploy, She picked up her two boys holding them high Shedding ambivalence boldly with assertive sigh. Dedicating bravely to parenting with rigor, Fighting ingress of despair with almighty vigor, She crushed hindrances powered by love alone, Aiming meraki resolutely to reach her throne. As the boys grew older she faced new struggle With eagle-eyes she kept them out of trouble, Enamored in plans for sending them to college, Guiding them to yearn for power of knowledge. Not retreating when incurable illness struck, Refusing to surrender to randomness of luck, Amid doctor's visits she kept working at her job As if nothing sublunary would cause her to stop. Her kids grew up to be intelligent young men Finding success in college with power of pen, Earning scholarships for duration of all terms, Getting job offers from many reputable firms. Having reached destination of her ardent trip She embraced her kids with a joyous firm grip, Longing to hold fervently till they reach their prime, Knowing well she'll be dead in a very short time. December 15, 2017 Meraki Sponsor: Silent One Placed 2nd

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Date: 6/7/2022 8:47:00 PM
What a wonderful tale of bereavement and endurance...! She braced the storms of life for the sake of her children. Endured illness and vexations of life and bravely worked for a living and anchored her life boat safely ashore ! Lovely story and lovely penning...Vijay
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Date: 5/6/2018 1:44:00 AM
Belated congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.
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Date: 12/24/2017 11:42:00 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/25/2017 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 12/24/2017 4:42:00 AM
This is a meraki of love, passion and strength of character, Vijay. Very uplifting. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2017 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your visit and lovely comments.
Date: 12/23/2017 7:45:00 PM
Glad to see you on the winner list. I do remember this sweet meraki for sure!! Congrats, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2017 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 12/23/2017 10:07:00 AM
beautiful poem der Vijay, congrats :)-luloo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Laura..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/22/2017 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay! Another masterpiece and will deserved win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Frances.
Date: 12/22/2017 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay on your win with a beautiful narrative verse.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 12/21/2017 10:11:00 PM
Back with congratulations :) xomo!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Maureen.
Date: 12/21/2017 4:32:00 PM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 12/21/2017 4:05:00 PM
Excellent, uplifting story told in well-written lines, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 12/21/2017 2:54:00 PM
Vijay the contest was about what is your meraki my friend... however this is a wonderful story and it rhymes very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the meraki contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Silent One.
Date: 12/20/2017 1:40:00 PM
WoW! Vijay, You have penned a powerful and heartfelt write. Your passion on being a mother speakes loud and clear. This moving write touched me to the core and brought tears to my eyes. Barbra Streisand singing "If I Could" went perfect with this write(Prior to hearing this I only heard Regina Bell's version of the song). In my eyes you got yourself a winner.Is this a true story? Best wishes- Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/20/2017 5:49:00 PM
What a written poem. Good write from a woman's perspective. It seemed so real. I have written several poems from a male's perspective:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Alexis..no this is fiction. Written from a mother's perspective but I am a man. Thanks for your comments Alexis.
Date: 12/19/2017 11:44:00 AM
A very beautiful write Vijay. Such dedication is admirable. Best of luck in the contest!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Judy...always enjoy reading your comments.
Date: 12/18/2017 2:43:00 AM
A very powerful woman indeed, she let nothing stand in her way. Amazing write Vijay, you are a master story teller. This one has Winner stamped all over it, but good luck just the same....Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:12:00 AM
Many thanks Maria---appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/16/2017 8:00:00 PM
wow, what a GREAT way to do that challenge. It makes mine look quite frivolous (not yet posted). Sure to score high, Vijay. This is the kind of mother who makes great sacrifice. I wonder if I could have been that woman had I been single.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2017 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/16/2017 1:26:00 PM
Uplifting, wonderful write Vijay, best wishes in the contest...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/16/2017 1:45:00 PM
Many thanks Charlie--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/15/2017 8:28:00 PM
Vijay, your beautiful write of this heroic Mom's struggles and determination strums my heartstrings in a sad but beautiful way. A powerful yet tender poem of maternal (lioness) love and devotion. Best wishes for a win, but already a winner with me my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 8:45:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your vote of confidence..appreciate your detailed comments..always enjoy reading your feedback.
Date: 12/15/2017 2:17:00 PM
- A mother after my heart ... wonderfully written, Vijay - She has sacrificed EVERYTHING - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..always happy to read your comments.
Date: 12/15/2017 10:13:00 AM
A powerful written poem that really reaches the reader. Very special Vijay. Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 10:27:00 AM
Appreciate your support Heidi...many thanks.
Date: 12/15/2017 10:06:00 AM
Wonderful pen Vijay! A wonderful mother. My best to you! xomo :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Maureen--appreciate your support.
Date: 12/15/2017 8:23:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant Vijay, GL in contest, a winner for me. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 9:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your comments..thank you Roy.
Date: 12/15/2017 8:09:00 AM
Hope you win! Well written. Grabs the heart!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Kim..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/15/2017 7:11:00 AM
A wonderful woman in this poem...A powerhouse of love and dedication... A lovely poem Vijay... I always loved Babar, super talented...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 9:12:00 AM
Thank you my friend..appreciate your comments.
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