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A Tale of Bravery

Quote : " A humble tribute to the brave Indian soldiers who fought in the Galwan valley.." The welcome sun gilded, the mighty seven mountain peaks As fingers adorned with rings, they lay aloft our eyes Beneath our feet, the silent sleeping snowy snake Conquered on the kiss of cold, a cambered frozen line. The eternal night of valour, written in silver past Still shining in the faces of unshuffled uniforms of bravery Twenty daring sons of motherland, in the ticking clock of darkness On the giddy throng of foes, fallen lightning strokes. Time was what they need, till the distant succour They fought an infinite war, fringing their martyrdom Until the land kisses, the unclouded moment of victory For the present cradles to sing, made their last salute. Second Place in Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest sponsored by A Dear Heart

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Date: 7/8/2020 5:07:00 PM
This is quite a contest entry -- and winner I see -- Tell me: How does someone from from a sand dune write so elegantly about snow-capped mountain settings?! (lol). You must have more than a little Shakespeare in you! (That 17th century Englishman who wrote about Caesar, Antony and Cleopatra, Hamlet the Dane, and so many others centuries removed from his era). All hail thee, Jenish! Salute, Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/8/2020 11:43:00 PM
So sweet Gershon.. You made my day.. But I'm not a born desert dweller.. I just happened to be in the desert for a fairly large time.. Thanks for the job.. I'm from the southern lush green part of India and also if you have a TV in your room, you can even describe heaven as your native land.. lol.. Thank you..
Date: 7/7/2020 5:48:00 PM
The content of this free verse and the able use of all 8 prompt words makes this a worthy winning entry, Jenish. Congratulations! Regards // paul
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 11:37:00 PM
Thank you Paul for your support..
Date: 7/7/2020 4:36:00 PM
William, congratulations on your win in my time contest, wonderful writing (I see your changed the title, no matter it was correct at the time of finalizing _Constance
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 11:37:00 PM
lol.. I changed the title.. You changed my name.. tip for tap..lol.. Just joking.. Thank you Constance for the kind placement and again as usual your contests are creating waves of inspiration in the PS pond..
Date: 7/7/2020 2:07:00 PM
Oh what a captivating tale of valour from your pen my friend. The narration through your enchanting words is brilliant. Congratulations on your win! :) Keep writing and inspiring!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thank you Aditi.. Your delightful words are my inspirations.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/7/2020 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem with a great picture. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 11:34:00 PM
Thank you Paula for your support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/7/2020 7:14:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to those brave fallen Jenish, congrats on a well deserved win. Tom
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Tom for your support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/7/2020 3:37:00 AM
Acts of valour will ever conquer Time.. they fulfill the now.. build a whole promising future.. and remain a bright honourable cherished memory of a past that wouldn't wane.. A great poem of beauty and recognition deserving all the honour! A great pleasure to read, Jenish! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/7/2020 3:41:00 AM
Thank you Besma for those elegant words.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/5/2020 2:43:00 PM
This tribute is pure genius, Jenish! Perfect ebb and flow, as well. Good luck, Gershon!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/5/2020 11:51:00 PM
Thank you Gershon for your kind support..
Date: 7/5/2020 6:28:00 AM
Brave and powerful tribute for those who fell, defending their country dearest, Jenish! Beautifully done! Blessings!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/5/2020 11:51:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your kind support..
Date: 7/5/2020 6:05:00 AM
Sad, poignant and meaningful. Lest we forget...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/5/2020 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Kai.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/5/2020 4:16:00 AM
Awesome entry my friend...you do them proud Jenish...a winner in my court...^WW^ :o)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/5/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior..
Date: 7/3/2020 2:19:00 PM
Hello Jenish sir, It's a wonderful tribute for the soldiers.:-) A big salute to you for having chosen this topic. "The eternal night of valour, written in silver past" each of lines are so true.Good luck for the contest.:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring us:-) Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Deepa for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/3/2020 6:40:00 AM
I read about the recent events--great tribute you wrote, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:23:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/3/2020 5:43:00 AM
Your poem is timeless dear Jenish, I'm wishing you a winning spot and every success in your future, All the best, hugs xo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:22:00 PM
Thank you Pixie for that wish and delightful words..

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