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'a Tacit Need'

Take a step back just for a second, you'd see her face the real her, not the one with the smile the one that's always ready to comfort she sometimes needs to be comforted she sometimes yearn for that hug not because she is weak, but because she is also human - her needs not always voiced but deep within they are screaming it's a voiceless need for compassion being the strong one means having to say, “I can't do it all on my own” maybe she is calling out being so good at pretending can be tiring give her a hug maybe you will give her the strength to go on in that she will feel loved, feel wanted – A simple hug maybe the chance she’s been waiting for...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/6/2011 9:02:00 PM
Yes, I agree....I'm sure she does need one . who doesn't? I'm thinking about a certain person on the soup. She is a beauty and this poem fits nicely....cause it too is a beauty, Wilma. . You know what? ....You are all right Lady Wilma..You is just all right! : )
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:52:00 PM
awww shucks!!! the chocolate's melting, melting!!! that was sweet hahaha but I need those hugs to be cooollld!! lol!! thank you sweetie pie!!! mwshugd! it is attempt number 45807894576 (ok that is an exaggeration) I didn't count anymore. thank you a thousand mwahugs back....thank you!!!
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:25:00 PM
oh shucks... I think you express that message really well here, Missy-- I think we all could relate to this to a certain level, of just wanting somebody to know that sometimes we just need to be plain 'ol hugged! Very nicely said here, Wilma :) gosh I think I am just about ready to give up-- lol I need a hug!! hahahaha! mwahugs!
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:23:00 PM
wonderful and insightful. Is it for Michael's contest? Hey,Wilma, did you tell me one time you were September born too? I am trying to find out who are all the Sept. babies here! Sorry if you are and I forgot. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 9/5/2011 2:12:00 PM
men are from mars... CALLING ALL MARTIANS! love the write, Wilma.. thanks! namaste~N
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:07:00 AM
Such compassion in this poem....thoughts to keep in mind, and heart with concern for someone needing love and support.
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:27:00 AM
Beautiful words shared this Monday morning here in NY... warm n muggy with a week of rain coming up... Hows my Cape Town Girl doing?? any more pictures from your beautiful country to share??.. with love always Michael...
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