A Symbol of True Love - Win

Blue 
roses
don't exist
though the science trying
To change the DNA of roses to create blue.
I wait for that joyous day for rose world
till then make do
with white rose
dyeing it
blue.
The
one who
find blue rose
stands for true love
The legend tells us, will become the king

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August 29, 2014
Form: Tetractys
Fourth Place Win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Deschler Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:34 AM
A blue rose would be beautiful to see. But I think it is kind of sad when scientists try to change something that is already so lovely, just the way it is!.... I enjoyed reading this nice poem, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the win!
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 8:05 PM
I have pink and yellow in my garden...blue would be grand...congrats
A. Sharma Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Oh I wud love to see Dr Ram! I think it's RNA in plants,, congrats on huge win!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. Lovely poem. Maybe someday we will see them.
Nance Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 7:01 PM
A blue rose from nature, that I would love to see. Grats on your contest placing. :)
Devnath  Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A   Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Enjoy my newest blog "A Senior Moment" if you'd like. LOVE LINDA
Strand Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 12:07 AM
But aroma wins over colour every time Ram.Rgds Brian
Freeman Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Sounds like a plan with the rose, Dr, Ram. Thanks for your comments today. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 9:44 AM
Dr Ram, loved your approach to the this one.. Best wishes to you :) WN
Tideswell Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Quite a unique approach to the contest, enjoyed reading your poem very much. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 7:15 PM
A wonderful piece of information Dr. Ram and good luck in the contest with this "beauty" of an entry.. I luv doing the research for these contests.. very invigorating.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Lovely,its always nice to read you. .In my country we give blue roses to the man we love on 14th February,but yes they carry no blue d.n.a,Their d.n.a is always passion,purity,innocent or fun,blue is never for Roses,great work-C
Trevino Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:53 PM
Unique this surely is, "hey, if I find the blue rose I shall be queen haha". Loved your entry for the contest. =(^.^)=Royal
Johnson Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Yes the blue rose doesn't exist as a species. And Garden Club rules forbid using one that is dyed. So we must wait for a real specimen. Thanks for your comments on my poem. Love, Joyce
Goff Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 7:28 PM
perfect anticipation in a tight form! Doc! jimbo
Culverhouse Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 6:13 PM
nice thoughts, I will have to find me a blue rose!! LOL
Green Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 4:24 PM
You have soup mail, Doc
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June 16, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Creative use of this challenging form. Interesting perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
Green Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Very cool poem and perspective. Might you be the Doc who genetically splices the roses? What kind of Dr. are you anyways?
Delacroix Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Interesting write. Does a blue rose have thorns? I wonder. Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:38 AM
Very nicely expressed, Dr. Ram. Blue roses would need a change in DNA. My sister wrote a play about a woman who tried to cultivate a white marigold and your fine poem reminded me of this. Surely, if one were to find the blue rose, they would have quite a treasure! Well done and best wishes in Mac's contest! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 7:25 AM
I love this unique twist to the contest!!! A scientist's point of view!! Terrific!! ~ Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 7:00 AM
I love that you defined it technically. the blue rose is unattainable love. Sharon also captures that in her sonnet. LUv, Andrea
Peranteau Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Another of mans desires which cause me to fear ! Great write Sir ! james
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