A Sworn Guarantee - an after-poem to - Loving Eyes

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An after-poem in response, to Christina Bowrings poem "Loving Eyes". Blessings of light, and appreciation to you for such a lovely poem!

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Fueled by affection, once carved to a tree Strong as a hard-working honey bee Found selfless in you, a sworn guarantee I hope this devotion answers her plea! I hold you next to them, as we both sway A never-ending nights finest fiery array But our song is humming in defiant foray Yet it's being felt in every way Remembering you, I'll walk an abyss The consumption I could never dismiss Heard like drum beats; her true beauty is this To the end of days, we will be able to reminisce A singularity of grandest notion Vast is this lovely swirling ocean Wild; like the time of locomotion Perfections elixir set into motion

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/3/2024 3:48:00 PM

A beautiful poem, flowed so perfectly through your 'loving eyes' BIG HUGS <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/3/2024 7:10:00 PM

I have been privileged to be inspired by so many wonderful people! The trials that I've stood and bore witness too. Throughout my life have led to an ambitious spirit, focused on the good always in those around me. HUGS <3 A.S.

Christina Bowring

Date: 6/3/2024 1:21:00 PM

Dear AS, this is such a beautiful, passionate poem that stands in its own right. ‘ A never - ending nights finest fiery array’ ‘Vast is this lovely swirling ocean’. Great rhyming and flow throughout this lovely monorhyme. Thank you so much for this delightful read in response to my poem. I’m honoured. Loved your comments below - there are so many amazing people/ poets here to admire, learn from, and be inspired by. May you continue to shine on your poetic journey. Many blessings to you :)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/3/2024 7:13:00 PM

Passion if for no other purpose should be the baseline of what defines us. I appreciate you giving me the opportunity to explore what was sparked by your wonderful writing! Sincerely A.S.

Deb M

Date: 5/31/2024 2:59:00 AM

That is so lovely AS! Debx

Deb M
Date: 5/31/2024 5:17:00 PM

You are very sweet AS and no need for thanks....l have always enjoyed reading your poetry! Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/31/2024 4:33:00 AM

Thank you Deb! It has been so enlightening and rewarding to meet so many great people here on the Soup. I like so many I'm sure find true inspiration in our peers. As I was reading Christina's work, I couldn't help but find myself coming up with a response to each line of it. I honestly had no intention of putting this poem out there for the world to see. I was very elated when I sent it to her and her response was. "You should post this" I want to truly thank you too, Deb. For the now years of support that I felt from you. Appreciating, you always your poetic brother.....A.S.