A Sweet Walk

A cup of ice cream, he invites
A spoonful near my lips to try
Raising his finger to remove
Dots of ice cream that dropped

Blushing with his slightest touch
Hardly trying this to stop
Under my lashes, his eyes sparkle
Then he said, "like the stars, you twinkle"

Slight bubbly exchange of talks
As we proceed happily on our walk
Glancing sideways for sometime
Checking indirectly a clue undenied

On the red stoplight in the street, we halt
Entwining his hand on mine for a hold
Guiding me gently to pass safely on lane
To my home, admiration he exclaims

by: 
olive_eloi
8:46 pm
02/17/2014

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 1:21 PM
A Sweet Walk, lovely title, just lovely to read, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 6:06 AM
:)
Santhana Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 3:35 AM
i live the part when u wrote'' like the stars, you twinkle''.. it's really awesome. good job
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 8:12 AM
:) thanks ;)
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