A Sweet Story

On (Payday) Mr. Good-bar got a (100 Grand) 
and took Maryjane Out on a date.
He picks her up in his (Grand Ferrero Roche.)
With the (Oreo) double stuffed chocolate wheel covers.
Maryjane wearing a Fluffy Stuff cotton Candy pink mini,
white jellybean necklace, and 
Showing off her (Sour Patch) tattoo on her ankle.  
Mr. Good-bar paid her a compliment saying
Lady you look sweet and delicious. 
They drove down (5thAvenue) to (Whoppers) seafood restaurant.
Where they had the (Swedish fish) and (Ice cream) for dessert.
After leaving a big tip,
Mr. Good-bar and Maryjane took in a show, 
at the (Krackel) movie theaters.
Where they saw “Wishing for Dark Chocolate.” in 3D
After the movie, right as the credits began to roll.
Mr. Good-bar ask Maryjane, if you’re not ready to call it a night.
I can get tickets to the (Hershey’s Symphony)
Or I can get tickets so we can go see (M&M’s) Rap concert.
And if you don’t care for either of those.  
I know this spot that’s around the corner,
a (Bit-O-Honey) if you feel like dancing? 
Maryjane not ready to go home, 
smiled and said the night is young, dancing would be nice.
True to his word (Reese’s) nightclub was right around the corner. 
When they arrived, the place was jumping. 
They could hear the music outside in the parking lot.
They saw a small group of (Jelly Bellies) harmonizing
Drawing a little crowd, and passing around a bottle of chocolate soda
As they hit the high notes.
Maryjane waved at her (Peeps) as they walked by.
There was a line of (Nerds) and (Goobers) waiting at the door.
But with the (3 Musketeers) working a (Crackerjack) crew,
 security was tight.
Mr. Good-bar showed his V-I-P pass and they were in... 
They moved right to the dance floor and did the (Now & Laters).
And then it got a little wild and crazy and everybody 
started doing the (Nestles Crunch). 
Dee Jay (Mike & Ike) started playing slow music for the (Sweet Tarts).
He dedicated a romantic song by the (Raisinetts) to the lucky couple. 
They danced enjoyed a few (Hershey’s Chocolate Kisses).
And then left the club.  
Mr. Good-bar took Maryjane to his (Powerhouse),
And put on some slow music by the (Junior Mints) 
Mr. Good-bar offered Mary jane some 
Chocolate Truffles and Bonbons,
She said you really know how to treat a lady.
Mr. Good-bar smiled and gave her a complement saying.
You’re a beautiful princess, 
I could do nothing less. 
And you look very (Bubblicious) tonight.  
Mr. Good-bar pressed a button 
on a remote control which dem the light,
 and two panels on the ceiling slid open.
Revealing a nighttime sky full of stars.
Showing her a view of the (Milky Way).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/20/2019 7:35:00 AM
This is awesome, great story and love the way you used all those candies for faces and places. Well done indeed...
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Robert Kinard
Date: 12/20/2019 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Sir
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