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A Superstitious Reflection

The water was quiet
Like the world had folded into one slippery cloth
With moist air dragged by some unknown power
The origin had never been known
Of this deep bowl of blue.

My fingers never reached the shallowest sand
Where the damp wind touched the naked earth
My face with every detail 
Was carved in this transparent wood
By an anonymous painter with brushes
Invented from somewhere above.

The blend of colors were mixed in shape
My hair that were just a bundle of ropes emerging from the dark
Interlocked with my forehead 
Like a brown sheet left forgotten by the dancer.
My speech had a source, which pierced through a crack in the face 
Guarded by thirty two white blood hounds
And a slimy python.

Suddenly a piece of earth
A pebble of such fine mould
Fainted into the translucent sheet
Which protected the Piscean empire underneath.

The painting that was behind a thin red line
Between superstition and reality 
Broke into the brackish water.

The carved wood was lost
The artist had erased what he had created-
An image seemed so true
But was indeed such a simple lie.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 10/5/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:09:00 PM
Soho, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 9:21:00 PM
Soha, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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