A Sunny Drizzle of Happy Episodes

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The title has been taken by kind permission of Valsa George’s “Sweet Memories” for which I thank and dedicate my poem to Valsa George for her friendship. 

We were lying on the sand,
Listening to the soft murmur 
Of short and light cool waves.
Above us, a red octagonal sun umbrella 
Gave us the much-desired rest.
 
Far away a bunch of guillemots
Cross swiftly across the tranquil bay
To rest near a sturdy lighthouse.
Whilst puffins nest in burrows in the cliffs.

My wife noted the activity of birds
As some flew around the lighthouse.
She wanted to go and investigate
But it was too hot to trek up the cliff.
We’ll go at sunset, darling, I coaxed her.
The sea will be purplish red
Whilst boats began their trip home,
Their sails so crimson as the sun begins to set.

So, we packed all into our SUV,
And slowly wound our way 
Amongst the thriving fields. 
In our small cottage we had some tasty fare
And after a shower returned to bed.
Then that nightfall we returned to the lighthouse.
Oh, what a sight we enjoyed.
Till late at night, we admired the vista.
How happy and elated we were as we headed home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/9/2021 11:16:00 AM
I think you live near the sea, right? I envy you that opportunity. I would love such sights as you describe in poems like this one.
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Date: 12/8/2021 11:09:00 AM
Great feel and imagery in beautiful verse, Victor. Hugs and lots of Love Eve
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Date: 12/7/2021 5:32:00 AM
You always set beauty before us…the loveliness of an island vista complete with a lighthouse. ~ hugs
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Date: 12/6/2021 3:46:00 PM
Hello Victor, you and your wife enjoyed a beautiful site in the evening. Enjoying the lighthouse scene. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 12/6/2021 2:35:00 PM
Lovely memories of lazy, hazy days of Summer spent together. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/6/2021 11:45:00 AM
A day of enchanted scenery and happy times is a day well spent, Victor. So nicely written and infused with serenity and peace. Blessings.
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Date: 12/6/2021 10:00:00 AM
You've created some very fantastic imagery.  Victor, you have spoken words of friendship and beauty. Your poem was on a superior cognitive level.
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Date: 12/6/2021 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem Victor, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 12/6/2021 8:48:00 AM
What a beautiful story, unfolding like a cinematic film, a Cannes winner! I was charmed by each step of your extraordinary day. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 12/6/2021 8:02:00 AM
Hello Victor - Hi. How very lovely soft quiet loving and so much more all in one with beauty as well. It is very reflective and your words are very clear as we follow such a wonderful moment in time. It was an honor turning to your page. It's been awhile so may this day find you well. Love and Blessings always.
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Date: 12/6/2021 6:49:00 AM
Beautiful imagery brush-stroked in this delightful painting, Victor. Let me join you in honoring Valsa, through your splendid write.
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Date: 12/6/2021 6:14:00 AM
A lovely remembrance of happy times, Victor, captivating write:)
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Date: 12/6/2021 5:17:00 AM
An enjoyable romantic story Victor by no better place than the coastline. Tom
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Date: 12/6/2021 3:24:00 AM
I got drenched in the sunny drizzle of the happy episodes..... Victor. More than the beauty of the vistas, the beauty of your relationship gleams as rays of the sun through the drizzle of memories....!
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Date: 12/6/2021 2:21:00 AM
Victor, you have woven a magical tale around a lighthouse, lovely...Delice
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Date: 12/6/2021 2:14:00 AM
- A lovely story ... whether it is from truth or not ... - Hope all is well with you, Victor - warm hugs from icy winter Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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