A Sun Bum

a sun bum withstands the rays falling like light-rain - godsend with eyes closed

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/5/2023 7:35:00 PM

More glory to the sun - if it burns the odd bum , well I guess there's a rush for the sunscreen. A fun read! Cheers, Brian

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2023 6:28:00 AM

Not if its momentary! I don’t get outside as much as I used to! Thanks, Brian! :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 6:06:00 PM

Vitamin D - beautiful and blistering! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2023 6:56:00 PM

For sure!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/1/2023 2:44:00 PM

Delightful Senryu, Kim. Very visual for me. The nice thing about Haikus and Senryus is that they are of the moment. They need no intense philosophizing nor psychoanalysis necessary. EITHER kthe reader gets it or not!! Pangie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2023 3:02:00 PM

You are so right! Blessings, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2023 12:10:00 PM

Sunshine effects the human body as does rain and sitting close to a running stream. God's free gifts to everyone. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my p age. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2023 2:44:00 PM

Thank you kindly, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/27/2023 1:07:00 PM

The sun is free, isn't it? :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2023 2:01:00 PM

It sure is! I don’t get outside enough :)