A Summer of Lastingness

In a summer of lastingness, long ago,
what you had in store for me my love,
I could've never known.

Through the depth and channels
of the heart, you have shown me
life begins, where the loving starts.

Like an unfolded rose growing in the
morning's misty dew, you feed me
and then sheltered me as I grew.

If I stood before you today my love
you would see a full rose in bloom,
not at all hindered by gloom. 

A strong stem, no regrets, no sorrow.
Only togetherness with you, full of
brighter tomorrows.

Thank you for all you planted in the 
garden of my hardened soil.
A summer of lastingness has forever
brought tenderness instead of toil.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/21/2016 1:03:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks come full circle. The ending meets the beginning. I think this expression is how I, myself, would offer gratitude sometimes, and whether the intended ever received it may regret never join that circle.
Login to Reply
Gulley Avatar
Sharon Gulley
Date: 9/22/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much Dalton for your wonderful comment on this write. Thank you also for stopping by to read. Have a blessed day. Sharon
Date: 9/18/2016 10:25:00 PM
This is so lovely Sharon! Congratulations on having this wonderful poem featured at Poetry Soup! : ) 7
Login to Reply
Gulley Avatar
Sharon Gulley
Date: 9/22/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Connie for the congrats on being featured. I did not know this and Thank you so very much for your sweet comment on my poem. I appreciate you it so very much. Have a wonderful day. Sharon
Date: 7/23/2015 3:11:00 AM
Hello Sharon!! A most beautiful Rhyme write here. This one says so much and has so much meaning. Superb Write!! A "7" + FAV for sure!! (BTW, Is you new book finished yet?? Has it been released yet for distribution?? If so, where can I go to buy a copy of it??) Wishing you all the best, and I'm glad you're back with us!! Cheers, Gary
Login to Reply
Gulley Avatar
Sharon Gulley
Date: 7/23/2015 10:03:00 AM
Hello Gary! Thank you for such a wonderful comment on my write and awesome rating as well. Always so nice to hear from you both....Sharon
Date: 7/21/2015 4:59:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. thank you for sharing.
Login to Reply
Gulley Avatar
Sharon Gulley
Date: 7/21/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Pam so very much for the kind comment on my write. I appreciate it so much....Sharon : )
Date: 7/21/2015 2:16:00 PM
A great piece from the very Queen of superior verse. I would be very happy if I had a half of your colossal gift. I'm an editor here in Kenya and I always overstep the bounds of my mandate, Lol! - check the "it's" (short for "it is") and the possessive "its" in the two of the three poems I have read. Otherwise, you are in a cadre of your own...7+++ as usual.
Login to Reply
Gulley Avatar
Sharon Gulley
Date: 7/21/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thank you my literary friend and what a wonderful comment you have gave to me this day. Thank you so very much for all the wonderful and kinds words and rating on this write as well as the teachings lol! You have a wonderful day, Hannington and God Bless.....Sharon G. : )
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter