a summer hiku

stifling heat in the cloudless sky a lone bird flies by

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Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/9/2025 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s poetry contest with a picturesque write. Wishing you again a delightful day.

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/8/2025 4:57:00 PM

Very nice, Andrea,

Jay Narain

Date: 5/8/2025 11:49:00 AM

Nice one.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/8/2025 11:45:00 AM

Very beautiful, Andrea! A perfect summer picture - <3

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 5/8/2025 9:38:00 AM

Hello Andrea, a lovely summer haiku Have a blessed day

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/8/2025 8:54:00 AM

wonderful, andrea!

Silent One

Date: 5/8/2025 6:46:00 AM

This is lovely.. you know how to write a proper haiku.. never mind this watered down version..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 5:41:00 AM

- Lovely, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 5/7/2025 9:27:00 PM

I love the imagery sweet andrea! You always amaze me with how youv write such different and picturesque hikus! This is no exception! Im sure a top winner! I need to write mine soon ! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Miranda Hawley

Date: 5/7/2025 8:35:00 PM

I like cloudless skies! I haven't forgotten to comment on your win in my contest.