A Summer Fancy

Standing in the forest I watch
as he strolls towards me
 tipping his hat
he stops and stares

Looking so deep within me
I feel heat rising inside 
as his eyes caress me
seeming not to miss anything

Without doing any more
than fixing me by glance
this man was stirring up
my senses one by one

As his eyes traced their path
it felt like he was gently stroking
as he lingered on my lips
they felt so hot and even crushed

They slowly drop lower
burning as they pass
i writhe wanting his touch
to feel his weight on me

A crack of a twig snapping 
breaks the spell, I start
watch him fading in the distance
was it all just a daydream?

contest: Skat's fantasty    written 06/13/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Shadow This fantasy dream is written so well it feels like reality. i could sense the passion and desire in each line. Thank you for the great comment on my Mirrors poem.
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:06 PM
Marvelous Shadow. Congratulation on your win. Connie
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:17 PM
hi Connie and ty kindly appreciated Shadow x smiles
Lamoureux Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Excellent win Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 3:46 AM
Ty Richard most kind of you Shadow x smile
Posey Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 4:21 PM
Beautifully seductive writing. Great entry.... congratulations are well deserved... Jake
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Hi Jake ty so much congrats to you too glad you liked it Shadow x smile
A  Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 12:00 PM
Hello Shadow, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 3:28 PM
hi SKAT and ty so much also for running contest Shadow x smiles
Neels Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:42 PM
A very passionate fantasy you have here Shadow. Really love the title you chose as well. ;)
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Wilma ty very much delighted you enjoyed it Shadow x
Trifiatis Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Fantasy or not it is very hot! Lucky him! Beautiful writing tender and romantic!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Very passionate piece, I hope you entered it in SKAT's contest I think you would do well.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 12:38 AM
I love the title for this one. Nicely done!!
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 7:35 AM
ty Andrea I like it too lol ty for your time reading it Shadow x
Roberts Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 6:53 PM
I like it Shadow ...Seren
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 7:36 AM
hi Seren so happy you like it Shadow x
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