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A Summer Fancy

Standing in the forest I watch as he strolls towards me tipping his hat he stops and stares Looking so deep within me I feel heat rising inside as his eyes caress me seeming not to miss anything Without doing any more than fixing me by glance this man was stirring up my senses one by one As his eyes traced their path it felt like he was gently stroking as he lingered on my lips they felt so hot and even crushed They slowly drop lower burning as they pass i writhe wanting his touch to feel his weight on me A crack of a twig snapping breaks the spell, I start watch him fading in the distance was it all just a daydream? contest: Skat's fantasty written 06/13/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/16/2014 10:59:00 PM
Shadow This fantasy dream is written so well it feels like reality. i could sense the passion and desire in each line. Thank you for the great comment on my Mirrors poem.
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:06:00 PM
Marvelous Shadow. Congratulation on your win. Connie
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:17:00 PM
hi Connie and ty kindly appreciated Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/17/2013 7:05:00 PM
Excellent win Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/18/2013 3:46:00 AM
Ty Richard most kind of you Shadow x smile
Date: 6/17/2013 4:21:00 PM
Beautifully seductive writing. Great entry.... congratulations are well deserved... Jake
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:33:00 PM
Hi Jake ty so much congrats to you too glad you liked it Shadow x smile
Date: 6/17/2013 12:00:00 PM
Hello Shadow, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:28:00 PM
hi SKAT and ty so much also for running contest Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/14/2013 1:42:00 PM
A very passionate fantasy you have here Shadow. Really love the title you chose as well. ;)
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:30:00 PM
Wilma ty very much delighted you enjoyed it Shadow x
Date: 6/14/2013 9:09:00 AM
Fantasy or not it is very hot! Lucky him! Beautiful writing tender and romantic!
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Date: 6/14/2013 8:14:00 AM
Very passionate piece, I hope you entered it in SKAT's contest I think you would do well.
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:38:00 AM
I love the title for this one. Nicely done!!
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Date: 6/14/2013 7:35:00 AM
ty Andrea I like it too lol ty for your time reading it Shadow x
Date: 6/13/2013 6:53:00 PM
I like it Shadow ...Seren
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Date: 6/14/2013 7:36:00 AM
hi Seren so happy you like it Shadow x

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