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A Summer Couplet

Let's build a quiet fire beside the sleeping brook tonight
and lie beneath the stars to watch the sparks rise out of sight.


Written: 6/9/2013
For Andrea's "Lovin' Summer" contest

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/7/2013 10:53:00 AM loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 7/1/2013 6:27:00 PM Heather a fabulous image with this summer couplet. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/1/2013 4:49:00 PM lovely! congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/1/2013 3:30:00 PM Ahhh!!! Romantic winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 6/30/2013 5:05:00 PM very evocative, heather, as you invariably are, paints a lovely picture of a peaceful summer night, great rhythm and flow too, congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/30/2013 4:19:00 PM Romantic and peaceful! Congrats on your win, Heather! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/30/2013 2:43:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 6/29/2013 11:42:00 PM This is very lovely, Heather...Congratulations on a very fine win! Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 6/29/2013 6:42:00 PM I find your entry so captivating. Perfect in every way... Makes me crave marshmallows.... Congrats on a seriously crafted entry... Jake Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/29/2013 3:02:00 PM Heather,amazing. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/29/2013 1:12:00 PM Congrats Heather on your win in the contest.Beautiful romantic couplet. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/29/2013 1:01:00 PM Oh, I have done this very thing......as a camper, and an outdoor girl, I love a campfire at night......as the sparks light up the sky! Lovely vision.....lovely poem!! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/29/2013 8:39:00 AM I should have known one of my favorites did this one. It's so lovely and romantic. Congrats on your win. Almost gave this number one spot! Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 6/29/2013 8:23:00 AM young dreams. Congratulations on this memory. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Drjim Martin Date: 6/29/2013 7:02:00 AM Very nicely done!! Very inviting!!! Congrats on your win...Jim Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 6/29/2013 3:13:00 AM Lovely image Heather. Loved it....Seren P.s. loved the comment to Mandy, I did reply on it lol....S Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/11/2013 8:40:00 PM Beautiful....love campfires. You captured the essense of summer well.... Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/11/2013 7:57:00 AM I like this image, I have a sudden urge to go camping. Login to Reply

Karen Anglesey Date: 6/10/2013 6:48:00 PM A delightful poem with striking imagery that makes me want to linger in a perfect scene of summer serenity. :) Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/10/2013 4:04:00 PM A besutiful imagery you have created..a serene spot indeed Login to Reply

Isaiah Zerbst Date: 6/10/2013 11:00:00 AM Sounds perfect! Am I invited? I see you also have a flawless rhythm combined with a smooth flow of words and thoughts. Definitely the real stuff! Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 6/10/2013 7:23:00 AM I'm there. I'm not lovin' summer, but I'm lovin' this couplet...my kind of place! I haven't seen this contest...going to check it out. Login to Reply