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A Summer Breeze

Lovely and exotic
She glides along the shore
Her dress flows like magic
I see an angel soar

         Love is in the air
         Afloat a summer breeze
         Caressing her hair
         Sailing the seven seas

Her brown eyes hypnotic 
Lips like a candy store
Her spirit’s magnetic
It’s her that I adore

         Love is in the air
         Afloat a summer breeze
         Caressing her hair
         Sailing the seven seas

The aura’s romantic
Her passion I implore
The moon makes me lunatic
the waves let out a roar

         Love is in the air
         Afloat a summer breeze
         Caressing her hair
         Sailing the seven seas



Read on air by invitation  ~  July 31, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on August 2, 2018 for contest SUMMER BREEZE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 4TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:11 AM
Congratulations on your win, Line. Wonderful lyric.
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Ruwindi Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Lovely poem...congrats Line!
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 11:14 PM
Thank you, Kaveesha, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
May Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Beautiful lyrics Line ..Congrats on your win
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Much appreciated.
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Nice one Line, congrats on a fine placement!
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Thanks, John. Most appreciated.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 1:44 PM
So much passion, I really loved this poem. Congratulations Line!
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, Francesca, for your lovely visit and comment.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:13 PM
A beautiful lyric, Line. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Thank you very much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Gondolf Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Really a beautiful lyric, Line, I really enjoyed this little lilt. Best of luck. John
Gauthier Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 11:48 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, John.
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:00 PM
wow, it's SO lyrical, Line. I love seeing this other side to you. John is sure to love it for his contest. This is one I should probably get busy and work on.
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Thank you so much for your most uplifting and encouraging poem, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Messina Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Lovely poem, Line! Much enjoyed...A sailing I will go...:) Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Faulkner Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Such a romantic summer scene, made me want to go sailing!
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.
Gentile Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:15 AM
This is so lovely Line, A 'breezy" pleasure to read! xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and much appreciated comment, Mike.
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