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A Summer Afternoon

Summer comes all clothed in green, To paint the path of a passing scene. Wheat in the field bound in sheaves, Shares the glory of gold tipped leaves. Gossamer drops of morning dew, Lie on a bed of radiant blue; And clusters that hang on wandering vines, Brings juice that gives sweet scented wines. The midnight owl takes her rest, Hidden in the tree in a secret nest; And raucous rooks in ferny nooks, Take in the scene with cautious looks. The hawk that flies under sapphire skies, Stretches her wing till daylight dies; Poised in flight, her arabesques, Soaring, dipping, seem so effortless. Prisms of sunbeams shimmer with gold, To capture the warmth till day grows old; Erasing the shadows that go at noon, As day wastes away, all too soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/13/2012 11:55:00 AM
Thought I'd take a peek at your early stuff. You are so good at closing. The last stanza adds a fine dimension to the rest. You be sooooooo good! Love, daver
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Date: 6/4/2012 7:12:00 PM
I love your effortless couplet rhyming, and your gift of creating softly flowing lines. There are a veritable feast of images here... a poem to be savoured through repeated readings. Well done Elizabeth! Luv, Keith :)
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Date: 5/28/2012 8:09:00 PM
Oh, I love this piece, Elizabeth! More outstanding imagery.. "sheaves, share the glory of gold tipped leaves"...sighhh, this is beautiful! It is like leafing through a cherished picture album, where the images are alive! Warm colours within this vibrant scene. Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:39:00 AM
A beautiful visual dear poet which you have penned ! Though I feed off of summer's season's gifts...I am far from a summer lover ! Fall and Spring rock my world Elizabeth. I've always been one of those chilly kind of guys, not jumping for winter, but liking it way more than summer ! I could live with Autumn and Spring all my days(daze) ! Great write my friend ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:16:00 PM
I believe I have found a new poet to follow...well done...TAH
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Date: 6/5/2011 4:02:00 PM
just lovely
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