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In the form of a vast sea, we are ushered to the meaning. Ships remain a creative possibility for long-distance way. We provide the affordable option of sailing or swimming. Going out with a group of loyal friends is a careless try. To relish oneself in the successful company of something. Without direct conversation, an alliance never survives. To seize control of your eternal destiny, you need to strive. There's a firm deadline approaching, so grasp this going.

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Date: 1/1/2022 5:43:00 AM
Much wisdom and inspiration you convey through your poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/31/2021 11:11:00 PM
Even in Biblical times, the sea was conceded a place for the damned. Lovely poem.
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Date: 12/31/2021 5:43:00 PM
The sea is so awe inspiring, a great metaphor for managing the turbulence of life, I also like your line 'without direct conversation, an alliance never survives' - communication is vital for moving forward, this is very profound and moving~
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