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A Sudden Second Sight

A Sudden Second sight 

It was long ago before horses became a status symbol
 and ponies were rich children´s toy that Egon fell to 
earth, from the hayloft down to the cow shed and he 
had an epiphany. He foresaw a world a world where 
there was no stigma attached to idleness, that it was 
normal to sleep, curtains drawn, to ten in the morning 
and have long brunch and not as now be served gruel.
When he woke up it was 2013 and was told gruel was 
healthy kept you fit to get up at six in the morning and
work twelve hours in an office, perform boring work 
that had no meaning other to keep people occupied and
in the false knowledge of being useful.
He had slept through the ages, except for lack of horse
Manure in streets, nothing much had change, even 
the unemployed to draw curtains open before going to
bed again… not working was still a stigma.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/11/2013 8:35:00 AM
i never saw employment in that sense before but a good point you do bring, enjoyed your write, ~always,... p.d.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/11/2013 1:47:00 PM
well it spells the end of the middle class
Date: 7/11/2013 7:19:00 AM
Jan - no sigma attached to idleness you say? Great news for me love, Kathy oopps - horse manure out of the streets is a good thing.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/11/2013 1:47:00 PM
horse manure is god for rose bushes

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