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A Stubborn Man - Cq

He made a bet That he could live Beneath the sea A stubborn man He took a breath Then held his nose Water was deep He died that way 8-31-19 Contest : Charlie - Quadku Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2019 6:01:00 PM

I found this one humorous. Only a fool would do such a thing. Enjoyed this. Congrats for the win

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2019 11:38:00 AM

Larry, congratulations on your win, excellent ***

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/18/2019 1:39:00 PM

Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 11:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Haiku, Larry :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/18/2019 1:39:00 PM

Thank you

Charles Messina

Date: 9/18/2019 7:01:00 AM

I love this Larry. I really like the ending too! I got a chuckle reading this. Congratulations on your win. All the best.. Charlie

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/18/2019 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Charlie and for the placement!