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A Stroll To the Bakery

Clouds swirling, bird circling The Heavens rumbled, heaved a sigh Ventured forth a lad, he bore no Cross Through angry streets, refuse-tossed Flies buzzed 'round him, fetid friends Night air crackled, 'neath ammunition's lens The lad strained hearts for a crust or crumb Hope lay dormant, her voice struck dumb... Bled dry, they covered him, face down in a gutter War's verdict sealed, its unutterable utter

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Date: 7/15/2019 6:27:00 PM
Wow! The title then the sad stroll through wartime.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/15/2019 8:16:00 PM
Yes, the title here is a bit of peace-time misdirection, isn't it?! Thanks for letting me know how you see it. Best wishes, gw
Date: 7/15/2019 4:22:00 PM
I ditto Harry's comment. PR
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/15/2019 5:07:00 PM
Hey, Panagiota, thank you for your enthusiasm...Aw, what the H, ditto my comment for Harry. :) gw
Date: 7/15/2019 4:11:00 PM
Wow, how powerful this little gem, that say so much, brilliant....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/15/2019 5:07:00 PM
Hey, Harry, thank you for your enthusiasm over this one. I'm trying my best to put out a good one once in a while. Best wishes, Gershon

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