A Stroll Through the Meadow

Visions of my true love danced in my head.
As we took a stroll through the lovely meadow;
I adored him so, I couldn't wait until we wed,
He was such an attentive and caring beau.

As we took a stroll through the lovely meadow;
We stopped to have a picnic near a waterfall. 
He was such an attentive and caring beau.
I loved him so much I wanted to give my all.

We stopped to have a picnic near a waterfall.
Our time together was unique and divine.
I loved him so much I wanted to give my all. 
The look in his eyes was kind and genuine. 

Our time together was unique and divine.
All of my doubts about our union just fled.
The look in his eyes was kind and genuine.
Visions of my true love danced in my head.






Contest: Pen A Pantoum
Sponsor: D.W. Rodgers 
12-07-2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/28/2020 6:08:00 PM
sounds like a match made in heaven dear Alexis, Congrats on your wonderful win. Blessings
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Date: 12/27/2020 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on this great winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/27/2020 1:52:00 PM
Hi Alexis, Thanks for taking part in this contest. Your attention to meter and rhyme made it a smooth read and a deserving winner. Dave
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/28/2020 7:53:00 AM
Hi D.W. You held a fantastic contest. I appreciate my placement. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Date: 12/27/2020 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was working overtime on this one. "Great Write." Enjoy your win today with joy/blessings......................
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Date: 12/10/2020 12:36:00 PM
I find this form very difficult but you've done a great job here, my friend
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Date: 12/7/2020 7:02:00 PM
Hi Alexis, This poem is beautifully rich in romance and imagery. Reading it is like entering a lovely dream. :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/28/2020 10:45:00 AM
Hi Alexis, I'm back to say congratulations on your win, with this lovely, romantic poem. Best of the Season, Evelyn :=)
Date: 12/7/2020 4:51:00 PM
If love is awake in your dreams Poetess, then it must be warm against your breast...this poem is powerfully pretty, I can imagine the joy because of the tender clarity...Justin
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Date: 12/7/2020 10:51:00 AM
Full of romantic imagery Alexis, you composed this well. Good luck Tom
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Date: 12/7/2020 9:35:00 AM
Nice capture and reveal! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/7/2020 9:34:00 AM
This is a joy to read, Alexis. Peaceful flow to it also :)
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:41:00 AM
A great pantoum that should please the sponsor. Great for the contest. ~~
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:41:00 AM
Lovely. I enjoyed this and wish you a beautiful week. Happy Monday. God bless you sweet friend
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:24:00 AM
- Romantic memories, lovely written Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:53:00 AM
Loved the tone and flow of your write, Alexis. A lovely stroll through the meadows.
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:51:00 AM
what a charming pantoum i adore the challenge of this form, well penned alexis:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:19:00 AM
A lovely stroll through the meadow with you Alexis. Beautiful memories of love shared by two... Belle :-)
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:05:00 AM
I remember true love, and your verses are lovely dipictions of its beauty. Sweet lines, Alexis.
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