A Stroll In the Dark

I‘ll leave distinct tracks for you tonight
in the black sands of Reynisdrangar
that no wave could wash away

the waning light dimming down the sky
reminding me of our childhood days
and our silly songs of innocence

but nothing compares to the softness
of her voice flowing deep in my veins
of her hair caressing my misty skin

the glamorous hand rises from the seas
seventy feet high in its splendour
beckoning me to her ageless embrace
	
it only takes a stroll in the dark
for only the honest hearts create
a warm flame of life to live with
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/28/2020 1:59:00 PM
Oh! i was hoping you would comment on this poe, Well anyway have a nice day.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2020 9:24:00 AM
Hello William Greco, I am glad that you answered my comment. Yes we are busy, but we find time to answer comments on poetry. Cheers! Enjoy your day my friend.
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William Greco
Date: 5/28/2020 3:03:00 PM
thank you for your comments! I was kind of busy last days, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it, cheers
Date: 5/26/2020 2:58:00 PM
Hello William Greco, yes it only takes a stroll in the dark for the honest hearts to be tother. Enjoy your day my friend.
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