A Stranger

In the flawless clear mirror I look at my familiar face, the nose, the eye, and the ear are all there in their place. Still people think I am strange, I ask myself, why? My mind’s nonconforming range I can’t control even if I try. My mind comes out in the open walks to the felled fawn forest, people’s set minds can’t discern if it exists or is hidden in the chest. Through the introspective eyes I look deep in my beating heart, the warm blood and the arteries are all there playing their part. Still people think I am strange I ask myself, why? My invaded feelings fume in rage when I find people pry. My sensibility breaks the shackle and runs alone to the lilac lagoon, the fickle minds people can’t tackle think I chase the veiled blue moon. Strangeness is a stranger from nowhere, a symbol of fawn forest and lilac lagoon, an alien perception that strangely stares at people who don’t see the blue moon.
August 22, 2017 Contest : All Yours (May 9) Sponsored by : Brian Strand

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Date: 9/18/2017 4:16:00 PM
Subimal, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/18/2017 11:54:00 PM
Thank you, BW.
Date: 9/18/2017 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/19/2017 12:03:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful and courageous write, Subimal, and so wonderfully-crafted - love it! Thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 9/19/2017 12:04:00 AM
Thank you, Greg for your encouragement and appreciation. I value your comments.
Date: 8/22/2017 6:20:00 AM
Another beautiful poem--so well done Subimal! Such an original theme!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/22/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. It's so nice of you to appreciate the theme.
Date: 8/22/2017 6:20:00 AM
Well done Subimal. I really like the Lilac Lagoon! :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi for liking the poem.
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