A Strange Liquid Diet

There's this roundish fellow named Moe Hyatt
  Who's beginning a strange liquid diet
    Hyatt will only drink kegs
    'No, Moe!' his poor liver begs
  Then all his innards start to run riot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tor Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:48 PM
That is many an alcoholic diet Gershon...
George Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 6:29 AM
That liquid diet does all the harm. Once we become addicted, sadly we can't change. Great limerick, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:55 AM
- Oh... a disgusting and horrible diet, Gershon :) -
Hawkins Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Ha! Ha! He was feeling more than liverish.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Ha, ha! Cute comment! ~ Special D. Livery
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