Notes About The Poem

Written on July 9, 2026

for:

When words speak for the silence of art Poetry Contest

 
by Silent One
 
on the painting:

IMPROVISATION OF NATURE - Oil Painting On Canvas By Leonid Afremov

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A Story of Hope

on the painting:
IMPROVISATION OF NATURE - Oil Painting On Canvas By Leonid Afremov

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A Story of Hope

Walking, in the flow
Of dyes, hues of melancholy
Changing summer’s light
To the music of a holy night
Fall’s essence, bleeding
Soft colors so alive, so bright

Journey, through the still breath
Of a muse, when laughter
Beckons – a caress
Autumn’s blessings, a song
Flowing beyond the ache of a past
Where summer melted
Into this season of sweet grace

Traveling, a road both rocky and calm,
Steady whispers, whimsical edges
Of the joy that echoes truth
Beyond the maples, the oaks, the birch
Heavy shades of glory, broken hues
Listening to the harvest notes
In the mist, the silence
Only pierced by the crunch of a leaf
Fallen down from its limb,
Where life was spent in shadows
Hopeful, and strong…

Enduring, the wonder of softest golds,
The trembling mysteries
Hesitant wine and gentling orange
Rusty and brave, the leaves
They keep falling across the dawn
As hearts find a blessing
In the sensations of a quiet yawn

Flavors of autumn, intense
Brighter than the passing stars
Flow of joy, comforting
Each crisp leaf, a thought
Between yesterday, summer’s soft
Writing words of blessedness
Through the morrow where life 
Continues on…

And the blessings, autumn reveals
Come through notes of courage
As each thought is taken captive
By the fresh and stunning notes
Of the healing breath,
Beyond the seas, the sun
Where trees remember, and flowers
Echo their prayers in a song
Meant for lovers – but also for the lone
Heart, the one who needs to see
Blessings…

Poured out through the artist’s brush
Spoken by a river’s tenderness,
The stars, the moon, the trees
Imagining the beauty…
In autumn’s tender grace,
A story, written by hands of faith
A history, broken apart by a season
And telling each heart
Each weary heart… the story
Of life, through a leaf, falling
Leaving home, only to begin once more
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 10:26 AM
Flowing beyond the ache of a past Where summer melted Into this season of sweet grace…love the mention of and imagery of the trees (love trees)… Hesitant wine and gentling orange…and much more. you’re great at writing ekphrasis! Congrats on first place! Fave!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations.... I enjoyed reading. What a Great/Pretty picture you have here Enjoy your day writing away with your wonderful win.............
One Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 1:51 PM
You really painted a picture here dear Regina.. such vivid imagery and vibrant colours throughout your poem... A most beautiful poem to accompany the painting... You described the season of diversity so poetically... Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
Terry Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 11:37 AM
I could hear instrumental music in my head as I read this piece. Autumn is my favorite season.
Puddifoot Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 1:23 PM
a really colourful & vivid descriptive write, as beautiful as the painting itself, enjoyed reading this one...thx for commenting on mine
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