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A Stormy Night

As I sit and ponder on my bed A storm is brewing in my head I wait for the madness to stop I feel my like my brain will pop Why is life so extremely hard? My soul is broken and scarred And tear ducts no longer work My Fiancé left me,with a smirk I sit and ponder how I can heal But first I have to somehow feel Alexis Y. 12/03/ 19

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/9/2019 12:24:00 PM

This fiance was not worthy, so please let him go. If he comes crawling back, you need to really think hard and maybe read this poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2019 11:40:00 AM

How could anyone leave you! if true, very silly fiance! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/4/2019 7:35:00 PM

this is another poignant write...i can feel the pain and loneliness through your words... hugs...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2019 3:11:00 PM

sorry if this is a true story about the fiance. Keep up with the writing. It's a great catharsis for all of us.

Chris Green

Date: 12/4/2019 8:33:00 AM

Such a sad and heartbreaking poem my friend. I hope your smile returns soon and the healing process can begin.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/4/2019 7:05:00 AM

Emotive--so well expressed, Alexis.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/4/2019 2:16:00 AM

Sometimes life can be cruel Alexis up one minute down the next, but when we reach rock bottom , remember the only way us up. Things will get better, you have many friends on here. Tom

Na Na

Date: 12/4/2019 1:01:00 AM

Very good Alexis. If this happened to you I am sorry it did. Sometimes love isnt what it seems to be. Also its good to get out so the hurt doesnt build up. Feeling bad is a good thing cause that means you have a heart and that you tenderly care and its ok to hurt. Soon you will find someone that genuinly wants you for you. It takes two putting in 100% to make a relationship work out. When its just 50/50 it will never work. I hope your heart finds peace again. Thanks for sharing this