A Storm Is Brewing

A storm is brewing
Everytime you leave your girl in the dark
Cold words she is chewing
Don't make such a deep mark

Everytime you leave your girl in the dark
She realises where she stands in your life
Don't make such a deep mark
Don't plunge into her the bloody knife

She realises where she stands in your life
When you beat her up with that belt
Don't plunge into her the bloody knife
You'll never know the pain she felt

When you beat her up with that belt
Cold words she was chewing
Don't plunge into her the bloody knife
A Storm Is Brewing

Written on- 17/4/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Misra Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 9:21 AM
This is wonderful writing, Sohini! I really enjoyed reading it. It is so beautiful. ~ kc
Mukherjee Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Thank you very much Karam :)
Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:51 AM
This is such a deep write, greatly soul-touching. May no one ever experience such cruelty in their lives!!! All the best for the contest:)
Mukherjee Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Thanks so much Daniel :)
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Gosh such deep sad imagery in your pantoum good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Mukherjee Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Thanks so much Jan :)
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