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One day I received a SoupMail from a Mystic Rose -- "want to write something together?"  How exciting, terrifying  . . . it's one thing to post yourself and close your eyes . . . but to join words with another??  I said yes!!  Now what . . . she wrote -- "you write something about summer and I will do winter."    OK, now what . . . summer is a big topic . . . road trips, reading by the pool, kids, sun, family reunions . . . . then the idea of a storm popped into my brain and we were off and running.

If you have not co-written with another -- do it.  I promise you it will be a blast, a challenge, a very rewarding experience.  You also get to know another person thus enriching your own life.  Working with Mystic Rose was a joy and honor -- the image that I see is the Beauty and the Beast . . . she being the Beauty -- her words are soft and flowing . . .

Thank-you Mystic Rose for being you!!

Summer Storm The wind blows – quick, hard, fast – the hot stillness is broken Corn stalks weave wildly as the wind marches through it rows Dust rises to greet this invading storm Large drops of heavy rain hit with a thud Lightening electrifies and paints the blacking sky Hail rips leaves from their home – a hard crack of thunder Clouds tumbling, rolling, forming into a funnel A loud rushing noise – a banshee scream Trees snap, the wind-train thunders by . . . then a deep silence Holding hands they arise from underground Sky clearing, sun peeking through A double rainbow appears – a promise – life . . . love Winter Storm The night is cold and wet, slick over bridges curving edge The rain freezes turning sheets of ice into nature’s sculpture Electrical power lines coated thick -- snap, taking heat away from all Nights of darkness with candles are filled with hearts of hope Ice storms that cripple a city and put a halt on activities As beautiful as they are terrifying, they demand a reckoning When January blows out fierce and February is held captive Our human spirit tired and cold but not beaten Prays for warmer days ahead with confidence Nights of hearths and man made fires Fur lined slippers and flannel robes Better off indoors, with close kin . . . warmed with hope and love Written in collaboration with Mystic Rose Beautiful is the friendship of a Mystic Rose . . . sweet and warm

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Date: 2/23/2017 9:01:00 AM
A massive tornado tore through Enterprise, Alabama, on March 1, 2007, leaving a swath of devastation about 180 meters (200 yards) wide through the small city. In the center of the storm’s path was Enterprise High School, where students sheltered in hallways as the tornado struck. The tornado ripped the roof off parts of the school, destroyed a hallway, the gym, and the stadium, said ABC News. By March 2, eight students were confirmed dead.
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:43:00 AM
Hi David, I wanted to let you know about my setting of "Summer Storm." It is part of a work for chorus, orchestra and soprano soloist entitled "The Wind." It commemorates the 10th anniversary of the destruction of Enterprise High School in Alabama by a tornado. It has six movements, of which your poem provides the text for the second. It will be premiered in Carnegie Hall on Monday March 27. https://www.carnegiehall.org/Calendar/2017/3/27/0700/PM/New-England-Symphonic-Ensemble/
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David Meade
Date: 2/23/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank-you Terre, this is very exciting and I wish you and your daughter the very best at your performance at Carnegie Hall. Do you know if the premiere is being recorded -- I would love to hear it? May your music touch hearts with joy, hope and love. 118:24
Date: 1/19/2016 2:52:00 PM
David, I am a composer and would like to set your "Summer Storm" for chorus and orchestra. May I have your permission? Best wishes, Terre Johnson
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:11:00 PM
When I wrote the summer storm I heard all these sounds -- before, during and after . . . I would be delighted to have you use the words. Please keep me posted, I would love to see how it turns out. All the best Terre Johnson -- Love Generously and let the music play . . .
Date: 5/8/2015 6:13:00 PM
How beautiful is this collab with Vienna, David. I love the awesome and powerful images created by your descriptive write. What a grand collab. A 7. Do you know, She recently won a POTD some 2 days ago. I like Vienna and her wisdom. I like you and your gentle ways, and I thank you both for your friendship. Hugs! Kim :)
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:47:00 PM
David, you both did excellent with the co-write, and produced a beautifully worded poem that speaks of summer and winter storms, and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 1/18/2015 11:58:00 AM
Very productive collaboration! I so enjoyed your free verse you should do more of it. Rosie IS a sweetheart! so true, so true, Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2015 11:42:00 PM
Awesome write between the two of you! Excellent on both accounts. Loved it!
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Date: 11/30/2014 5:57:00 AM
Loved the imagery. A wonderful poem!
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Date: 11/24/2014 8:30:00 PM
David, I am enjoying your haiku collection and season poem. Thank you for kindly commenting on my poem...
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Date: 11/22/2014 7:51:00 AM
Very descriptive work from both of you..Your talent shines in the midst of stormy weather..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2014 8:50:00 PM
Thank-you Ms. Sara, may all your storms be filled with love and hope.
Date: 11/22/2014 3:34:00 AM
the imagery in these is stunning great job you two hugs
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Date: 11/23/2014 8:49:00 PM
Thank-you Ms. Hamilton . . . my you always be safe from life's storms. . . all the very best. Love your first name
Date: 11/21/2014 3:29:00 PM
David your poetry (this poem) has me in a space where someone is reading a short story to me; it is so vivid. Thanks
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Date: 11/21/2014 8:02:00 PM
You are most kind . . . this was a fun write with Mystic Rose and we appreciate your comments. All the best.
Date: 11/20/2014 5:55:00 PM
David, I have been enjoying your Haiku poems, but this duet with Mystic Rose is superb. I've always loved storms. Even though I know they can wreak havoc, I love to watch a good storm. How could we ever fully appreciate warm, balmy weather if we had never experienced a storm?
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:56:00 PM
Thank-you Cona, I agree with you. Storms are mighty works and allows us to pull together afterwards and celebrate love and life. Here's to a good safe storm! All the best.
Date: 11/20/2014 11:26:00 AM
A brilliant Collabaration by two great poets.
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:34:00 PM
Thank-you my friend -- it was fun being in a storm with Mystic Rose!! she rocks
Date: 11/20/2014 11:02:00 AM
David Meade-Mystic Rose duo blast off in this duet. I can visualize double rainbow with David and strong coffee with MR.Is it not a great combination David? Love to both of you. take care XXXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:35:00 PM
Yes, nothing better than strong coffee, a strong woman, and a double rainbow my friend. May you find the treasure under the rainbow.
Date: 11/20/2014 9:41:00 AM
Beautiful combination of two great writers, truly enjoyed :) love and hugs to both of you eve 7
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thank-you Eve, it was a blast to write with her! All the best.
Date: 11/20/2014 8:26:00 AM
Lots of amazing imagery and concrete pictures David! Really enjoyed your excellent poem with Rose! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Dorian -- Mystic Rose is a great coach, friend and writer . . . it was a great joy to work with her.
Date: 11/20/2014 7:46:00 AM
After such a result from a wonderful collaboration one is left double benefitted by the beauty of Summer and Winter Storms! A seven to each for these majestic poems, dear David and Mystic Rose, Mystic Rose and David!
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:40:00 PM
Ah, my dear friend Demetrios -- thank-you for your kind words, storms are fun especially if you are with a Rose! Loved your poem today!
Date: 11/19/2014 5:22:00 PM
What a beauty this is bringing so.much warmth on such cold lonely nights-Tmfvs!
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:44:00 PM
My dear friend, thank-you for your faithful visits . . . my heart is always warmed by your words.
Date: 11/19/2014 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on a very captivating co-write, to both of you...well done! A storm duet, indeed! Collaborations can be so rewarding, in different senses. I have experienced this several times. David, your comment about initial apprehension is understandable and I can relate to it, but once the plunge is taken you find that swimming becomes easy! // paul
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:47:00 PM
Yes, I agree -- when you take a plunge with someone like Mystic Rose, you can ride her wave!! I hope everyone tries it at least once. All the best my friend -- you are most kind and always have much wisdom to share -- it is always appreciated.
Date: 11/19/2014 2:05:00 PM
I see the rainbow and I am warmed by the fire. Beautifully done, you two!
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:50:00 PM
Life is good when we can take time to enjoy the small things . . . thank-you for your visit.
Date: 11/19/2014 9:30:00 AM
superb write from you.. :) i have some poems o wrote with someone here.. :) indeed i rrciprocate your words.. :! love sissy Vie:) she is one of my friends too here. :)
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:52:00 PM
Yes, I really enjoyed your co-write -- hooves rings in my head. It was so much fun working with Mystic Rose -- she is marvelous!
Date: 11/19/2014 8:07:00 AM
nice collaboration works well, I enjoyed it start to finish.
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:53:00 PM
Thank-you kind sir -- I can tell you are a veteran of many storms. Thank you for your visit and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Date: 11/19/2014 8:03:00 AM
- David, I must admit that I am being "terrified" me too when someone asks me to write together :))) - It feels much "safer" to write alone :))) - but the results are often amazing! - M.R. and you have each your part ... and it fits nevertheless perfectly together! - Well done !!! - Lovely poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:55:00 PM
Yes, you all did wonderfully . . . I hope more will reach out and do it . . . thank-you for you willingness to share -- never stop writing my friend.

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