A Storm Came Late

Frigid, knife-edged winds from the northwest
sweep down like hungry raptors on 
pewter gray skies. Feral eyed, keen on destruction.
Late May. Sullen skies discharge sleet and glacial,
stinging rain. Threatening each newly exposed
green leaf and sprout. Frozen rain. Unrepentant.

People, startled by the velocity of a winter-spring
storm put the parka back to work. Vibrant summer
birds topple dead from their refuge or tree limb.
Daffodil, crocus, and lilac suffer the slow suffocation of ice.
Hedgerow and tree leaf are burned by ice' frozen fire.
The sun, moon, and stars hibernate for days.

Frail light and little warmth. Bleak optimism.
Grim moods darken. Wildlife endures.
An emerging cycle of life has been altered.
Days are lived in half-tone and sepia.
The sky makes no act of contrition.
The unseen parallels, the lands, ice and cold
north of the Arctic Circle visit their wrath upon us,
erasing much of a slate-gray board of life.
A new and boundless spring is cast aside.

Souls pray and await warmth and golden light
to renew and reincarnate a missing Spring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/26/2015 12:53:00 PM
Wow! Your descriptive words made this storm come alive! Excellent imagery! Love this! Going in my fav's. Love, Kim
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read, Kim. It was a tough week of freezing temps, hard frozen rain and May, by golly! We are on the other side of it now. Nature is really resilient. I am amazed what the creator has done. Thanks for your comment!!
Date: 5/26/2015 6:46:00 AM
Almost had to put a polythene sheet over my computer monitor from that hailstorm, Brian. I think it's fairly safe to say that you've got the hang of quality descriptive free verse. Looking forward to the first rays of new sun through broken cloud. Regards, Viv #7
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:07:00 PM
We got them, Viv. Everyone was worried that it would stunt all the new green things and wildlife. My mood sank like everyone else's. Thanks so much for stopping by to read and comment. I really appreciate it.
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