A Stone's Throw

A Stone’s Throw

A change in the river by only one stone
in someone’s life maliciously thrown.
 
Chain reaction, stillness disturbed.
Like ruffled feathers peace is perturbed.

The mirror broken by life's quick blow,
a second of altering the current's flow.

Cause and effect, fluid undulations
making tiny waves in tense situations.

All is calm.  Then comes a thing.
Eyebrows make frowns. Water forms rings.

We are the water. Fate is the stone
breaking the surface, quite unknown. 

Troubles soon fade into life's trifles,
as a stone sinks fast to an endless cycle.

8/26/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/24/2020 2:14:00 AM
Beautiful dear Janis..Congratulations on your awesome win!
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Date: 11/23/2020 10:14:00 AM
Lovely couplets Janis. I really like the wisdom of the last couplet, "stone sinks fast to an endless cycle." Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/23/2020 9:36:00 AM
Janis, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 12/22/2018 7:44:00 PM
For every action there is a reaction and your enlightened poem aptly depicts the effects of fate's negative blow. I enjoyed your poem of metaphoric and poetic beauty, Janis. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/22/2018 3:13:00 PM
Very clever, Janis. Well penned. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/22/2018 12:23:00 AM
Janis, congrats on your win on Mile 1 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. Your poem helps us to see that our actions and reactions can have negative consequences.
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Date: 2/27/2018 7:20:00 PM
Sincere congrats on this wonderful poem's win, Janis - blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 2/23/2018 9:51:00 AM
I like your poetical metaphor very much: 'fate is the stone breaking the surface...' -- brilliant!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 2/23/2018 4:22:00 AM
Perceptive observations on life, elegantly expressed. Impressive poem, Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/23/2018 2:34:00 AM
Brilliant Janis, congratulations for a most deserving win...
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:02:00 AM
Charlie, good to hear from you. Thanks always.
Date: 2/22/2018 10:29:00 PM
Most interesting musings, Janis. A definite FAVE for me.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:03:00 AM
Line, I really appreciate the FAVE. I never knew this little poem would go this far. Thanks and God Bless.
Date: 2/22/2018 9:05:00 PM
Well done, Janis! Congratulations on the win. ...Fran
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Francis.
Date: 2/22/2018 8:33:00 PM
A wonderful write, Janis! Congratulations!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 2/22/2018 6:35:00 PM
Janis, I really love this poem--skillfully-written, conveying much thought-provoking wisdom. CONGRATS!! Janice
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/23/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/1/2017 7:48:00 AM
Great analogy and wonderful imagery. Even though the surface returns to calmness, the lake is never the same as the stone still lurks at the bottom. Nice write, Janis! Regards, John.
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:45:00 PM
true dear poet, from the point of impact they spread until they vanish, and the stone rests on the bottom to again be washed to shore...an endless cycle...wise poem
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/26/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thanks, Frederick. Blessings Janis.
Date: 8/26/2017 2:23:00 PM
yes that little stone can have a huge chain reaction and can cause waves - i love the uplifting ending to the poem janis:-) hugs jan xx
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/26/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 8/26/2017 2:12:00 PM
enjoyed the transformation and change of the ripple's flow, janis... well done!...huggs
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Date: 8/26/2017 5:18:00 PM
I have to write, copy and paste my reply. Thanks, Nette. Good luck in the contest.
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