A Stone In the Cold 6 Runnerup

Ahead the bear in sudden motion stands,
focusing on the downed, forgetting me.
His pain now deadened by pure, primal rage,
he is intent on mangling fallen three.
My sleeping conscience suddenly awakes.
My frigid fingers let an arrow fly.
Though they are criminals and I'm the law,
I cannot let these hardened felons die.
My heavy pocket holds a loaded gun,
though using arrows, I had placed it there.
My posse is nearby, they'll hear the shot,
a shame I have to use it on the bear.

Happy that my hunting has not failed,
my job's not done until I see them jailed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Way to go...Great work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, joyce
A  Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:11 AM
Joyce, , Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Great work for the contest..All together we ought to have that bear taken care of ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Joyce, just by making sure those bad guys got put away, you showed your conscience is very strong and good. You did a great job, wrote a quite metrical sonnet too!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 9:54 AM
A thrilling captivating hunter's poem. Ah poor grizzly. One of yor best in poetic skills and rhyme flow. Nice to read u again. Tc.
Horne Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 8:57 AM
love this, Joyce. Awesome. Hope you're having a great week, my friend xx
Rogers Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
Dunn Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Nicely done a powerful write with alot of meaning behind it. cheri thanks for the sharing and for your wonderful comments on my work sorry i had to make it a short come back next time i'll write more.
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Joyce a vey good sonnet as a stand alone sonnet, it has depth and a very good image..David
Bauer Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 4:08 PM
excellent poem, joyce! i could picture the whole scene. ~ by the way, congrats on your team's win!
Kayode Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Thank goodness for your civility,but pursue this to the end. God sonnet Joyce. Kayod5.
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