A Stone In the Cold

Once a marksman was in the woods to hunt He met a snipe as he was on his way Snipe said “don’t hunt my kids if you confront As they have gone in the forest to play”. "Alright, But how shall I know they’re your kids? Tell me something about what they look like?" "Oh, Marksman, they’re the most beautiful kids!" Nodding not to shoot them, went on his hike. On return, a string of young snipes he held The snipe crying looking at her kids dead. "Oh, why didn’t you shoot me in my kids’ stead?" "I’ve shot the ugly I could find instead." The snipe said “Woe to me, don't you know” fool” Moms think their children the most beautiful”.
+++ March 12, 2014 Dr.Ram Mehta Form: Sonnet Third Place Win Contest:Hunt for a Sonnet Gems & Seven Stones in the Crown by Debbie Guzzi PS: I had entered this poem on 3/4/14 but I was giving final once over to the poem, I don't know somewhere I clicked and the whole page went blank. So I have reposted it again
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Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Children will always be the most beautiful in their Mother's eyes. This poem was very powerful and quite heartbreaking. A great sonnet, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
Stephens Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 8:37 AM
HI, Well written and thought out. Makes one think. Congrats on your placement. Regards Theresa xx
May Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
A  Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:14 AM
Dr. , Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
Parker Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 6:45 AM
- Beautifully written to a / your mother, Dr.Ram - Of course: "Moms think their children the most beautiful" - I wish you good luck in the contest. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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