A Stinging Regret

She was 
Within striking distance 
Eagerly waiting,
With bells on, for him.
She could have been 
His million dollar baby.
Pity, he took too long 
To pounce.
Between a blink, 
Far out of sight was she.
He strained his eyes 
Longingly searching for her 
Across a desolate expanse 
Into nothingness.
She's walked into 
Another man's waiting arms.
Facing each sunset 
Lonesome,
He looks back 
With a stinging regret.


Date written: 05/04/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Blodgett Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Great expose' of regret! Health and Happiness, Lonna
Ibeh Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Thank you so much, Lonna:-)
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 4:55 PM
wow, Edward, I love this one. Truly a stinging regret. Congrats for the win
Ibeh Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Ashley Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Dear Edward, a stinging regret for sure! Your evocative verse bring the heartbreaking scene to vivid life upon the page. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Coming from Poetrysoup's greatest poet ever - in my opinion, at least - that means a great deal, Susan:-) Thank you for the congratulations and visit! Most appreciated.
Milgate Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:56 PM
A thoughtful poem.
Ibeh Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:01 AM
A tale often left untold, but one too many times filled with regret and "what ifs." Nicely written, Edward.
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Welcome
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 3:06 AM
Thank you very much, Lin:-)
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