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A Startling Development

Her comments had really startled me; I wasn't expecting any, you see So I hid in the dark under my bed ~ Then I heard this, 'Please marry me!'

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Date: 4/27/2023 3:17:00 PM
Needed the chuckles gw. Many thanks! laf :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2023 7:45:00 PM
Good. Keep smiling, Linda!
Date: 4/26/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thanks for the laughs, Gershon. I enjoyed the way you ran for cover. :D
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2023 7:44:00 PM
I used to be an undercover agent. lol.
Date: 4/26/2023 2:43:00 PM
LOL this cracked me up. ! You are funny Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:16:00 PM
Trying to replace the 'Good Humor Man' isn't easy... lol
Date: 4/26/2023 8:35:00 AM
I found this delightful … as I do you.! Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/26/2023 8:11:00 PM
Hurrah. Pangit
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:15:00 PM
You are too nice to me, P! The feeling's mutual...
Date: 4/26/2023 8:32:00 AM
Depending on the girl, I probably would have stayed under the bed:) Knowing you, you probably cracked a joke,GW.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:14:00 PM
Nah! I tried a Kamala Harris 'word salad,' actually. ~ Where's the French Dressing?
Date: 4/26/2023 4:29:00 AM
She wanted to make an honest man out of you lol. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:13:00 PM
She's got me chained to the bed now, Tom. ~ Honest Lee
Date: 4/26/2023 4:29:00 AM
GW, such a sweet "development"! I am assuming that you were in the same bed!! Happy Wednesday !!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:10:00 PM
Who, me?! I'm just the Hotel's maid service. lol.
Date: 4/25/2023 9:27:00 PM
I hope you answered yes. I loved this "Rubia", whatever that is.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:18:00 PM
A Rubia is a Scooby-Dooby-Doobia of a poem. Or something like that. lol.

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