A Startling Development

Her comments had really startled me; I wasn't expecting any, you see

   So I hid in the dark under my bed ~ Then I heard this, 'Please marry me!'
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Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 3:17 PM
Needed the chuckles gw. Many thanks! laf :)
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Good. Keep smiling, Linda!
Buehler Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Thanks for the laughs, Gershon. I enjoyed the way you ran for cover. :D
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:44 PM
I used to be an undercover agent. lol.
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 2:43 PM
LOL this cracked me up. ! You are funny Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Trying to replace the 'Good Humor Man' isn't easy... lol
Romios Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:35 AM
I found this delightful … as I do you.! Pangie
Romios Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Hurrah. Pangit
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:15 PM
You are too nice to me, P! The feeling's mutual...
Turner Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Depending on the girl, I probably would have stayed under the bed:) Knowing you, you probably cracked a joke,GW.
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Nah! I tried a Kamala Harris 'word salad,' actually. ~ Where's the French Dressing?
Gentile Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 4:29 AM
GW, such a sweet "development"! I am assuming that you were in the same bed!! Happy Wednesday !!!
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Who, me?! I'm just the Hotel's maid service. lol.
Cunningham Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 4:29 AM
She wanted to make an honest man out of you lol. Tom
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:13 PM
She's got me chained to the bed now, Tom. ~ Honest Lee
Hawkins Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 9:27 PM
I hope you answered yes. I loved this "Rubia", whatever that is.
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:18 PM
A Rubia is a Scooby-Dooby-Doobia of a poem. Or something like that. lol.
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