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A Startling Development

Her comments had really startled me; I wasn't expecting any, you see So I hid in the dark under my bed ~ Then I heard this, 'Please marry me!'

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2023 3:17:00 PM

Needed the chuckles gw. Many thanks! laf :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2023 7:45:00 PM

Good. Keep smiling, Linda!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/26/2023 8:08:00 PM

Thanks for the laughs, Gershon. I enjoyed the way you ran for cover. :D

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2023 7:44:00 PM

I used to be an undercover agent. lol.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2023 2:43:00 PM

LOL this cracked me up. ! You are funny Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:16:00 PM

Trying to replace the 'Good Humor Man' isn't easy... lol

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/26/2023 8:35:00 AM

I found this delightful … as I do you.! Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/26/2023 8:11:00 PM

Hurrah. Pangit

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:15:00 PM

You are too nice to me, P! The feeling's mutual...

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/26/2023 8:32:00 AM

Depending on the girl, I probably would have stayed under the bed:) Knowing you, you probably cracked a joke,GW.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:14:00 PM

Nah! I tried a Kamala Harris 'word salad,' actually. ~ Where's the French Dressing?

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/26/2023 4:29:00 AM

She wanted to make an honest man out of you lol. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:13:00 PM

She's got me chained to the bed now, Tom. ~ Honest Lee

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/26/2023 4:29:00 AM

GW, such a sweet "development"! I am assuming that you were in the same bed!! Happy Wednesday !!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:10:00 PM

Who, me?! I'm just the Hotel's maid service. lol.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/25/2023 9:27:00 PM

I hope you answered yes. I loved this "Rubia", whatever that is.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:18:00 PM

A Rubia is a Scooby-Dooby-Doobia of a poem. Or something like that. lol.