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A Star Has Fallen

A star has fallen a brush of light that painted a little corner deep in the firmament before it turns into dark. A dream that vanished before it even became a glisten of wish a bud that withered away before I study it or it was just a breath which sacrificed itself for other breaths and shone like a Sun before it unites itself with the Infinite Being the 'Ancient of Days'.

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Date: 8/8/2014 7:38:00 PM
you are so in one with nature, with the universe!!
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Date: 10/20/2013 3:10:00 AM
You have a way of transforming events that could have crushed hearts otherwise into something very beautifully written and inspiring. I'm crazy about your imagery! Keep it up!
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Date: 8/13/2013 2:48:00 PM
like this poem, truly a classical style of writing, enjoyed
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 8/21/2013 12:43:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 7/17/2013 12:45:00 PM
An excellent write. Thank you for the nice review. Roger Dale Hadden.
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 8/21/2013 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, too!

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