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A Star

She would be an explosion one beautiful light a celestial being sharing inside each vision thundering from the Heaven's shook me timbers leaving one all jelly at the knees Blinding a star falls upon this earth shivering fingers silver shimmering each and ever word liquid dazzling the very light beyond beauty she who landed in front of me The mouth falls wide open barely able to close words become faint smiling upon a trail of fairy dust whispering silently as it sprinkles all over before impact magic You landing with me enchanting take me to you're paradise as the gates slowly open breathing in your air That wonder in the sky has always been love how I saw you Faraway princess you're my moonlighting dream delight

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Date: 9/24/2014 8:57:00 PM
This was quite beautiful. I was lucky to have found this among your other poems though if I had the time to read the others they would move me also.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/25/2014 2:05:00 AM
thank you ever so much for your kind and beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated richard
Date: 9/20/2014 7:45:00 AM
:) Liquid words...a trail of fairy dust....dream delight...your words are magic! Hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:18:00 AM
thank you ever so kindly eileen for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/19/2014 3:52:00 PM
- A star or a princess ..... it's beautiful Liam - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:13:00 AM
hope you had a good weekend thank you for the wonderful comment truly appreciated

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