A Star

She would be an explosion
one beautiful light 
a celestial being
sharing inside each vision
thundering from the Heaven's 
shook me timbers 
leaving one all jelly at the knees

Blinding a star falls upon this earth
shivering fingers silver shimmering 
each and ever word liquid 
dazzling the very light beyond beauty
she who landed in front of me 

The mouth falls wide open
barely able to close
words become faint smiling
upon a trail of fairy dust whispering
silently as it sprinkles
all over before impact magic

You landing with me enchanting
take me to you're paradise
as the gates slowly open 
breathing in your air

That wonder in the sky
has always been love 
how I saw you 
Faraway princess
you're my moonlighting
dream delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breese Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 8:57 PM
This was quite beautiful. I was lucky to have found this among your other poems though if I had the time to read the others they would move me also.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:05 AM
thank you ever so much for your kind and beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated richard
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 7:45 AM
:) Liquid words...a trail of fairy dust....dream delight...your words are magic! Hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:18 AM
thank you ever so kindly eileen for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 3:52 PM
- A star or a princess ..... it's beautiful Liam - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:13 AM
hope you had a good weekend thank you for the wonderful comment truly appreciated
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