A Star

heavenly bodies lighting up the universe wish upon a star

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/2/2019 10:44:00 AM

Some forms I struggle with but love doing these too. Another gem Sandra. If you get a minute check out my African anthology. Looking forward to yours. Tom.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/2/2019 12:07:00 PM

Thank you, Tom I know you are also a limerick master. I just read your African anthology, loved it, so impressed with it in every way. Wonderful writing! The imagery was so vivid.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2019 7:24:00 PM

this is so sweet.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/1/2019 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2019 12:41:00 PM

Sandra, good haiku are so difficult to write, but you and Paul Callus seem to have mastered the art. I love this one, especially the last line. Teach me! Hugs, Carolyn

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/1/2019 7:34:00 PM

If I figure this out, I will teach you, Haiku, if you teach me everything else. What do you think? : )

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/1/2019 1:39:00 PM

Carolyn, a lovely comment, and a compliment! Thank you so very much. I was afraid to try it, the contest was the first, and now I can't stop. Tom says that I have haikuitus, I think he may be right. I would love to teach you, but I don't know how I do it! : ) lol