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A Stagnant Condition

Joel once made a New Year’s Resolution
To put an end to procrastination
But half way through the year
He found himself waiting there
Lost in his stagnant condition
~*~

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2013

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February 2, 2013 at 9:48 AM

Nicely done I'm still litsenning.

January 18, 2013 at 8:21 PM

very nice limerick Annalise.....did you send me a soup mail?....If you did I did not receive it.....Joseph

January 9, 2013 at 5:08 PM

I love to work on limericks.... I learn from reading others.. Good job and a belated Happy Holidays...... Jake

January 9, 2013 at 5:01 AM

clever limericks is this... like it...

Lucilla Carrillo

January 7, 2013 at 8:38 PM

Good work done here AnnaLise. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 7, 2013 at 6:22 PM

Charming and didactic. Beautifully expressed. I have to be careful .Thank you

January 7, 2013 at 4:11 PM

We can all be guilty of that one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

Victoria Anderson-Throop

January 7, 2013 at 2:03 PM

an appropriate message to many of us procrastinators of the world.....it must be in our DNA...

Andrea Dietrich

January 6, 2013 at 3:52 PM

Good way to do your entry, Annalise. RIght on topic!!

Toquyen Harrell

January 6, 2013 at 1:36 PM

Lol, he may be waiting there forever -in his condition. The poor guy. Someone needs to prod him along. Cute write, Annalise :)

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