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A Squirrel Family Tale

On a cold wintry day, While their mom collected nuts Two tiny baby squirrels In their nest warmed their butts The wind was blowing hard And the nest needed a fix So, their dad went out searching In the blizzard for sticks He returned with a mouthful His cheeks full and stuff He made seven more searches Till he then had enough The kittens asked mom "Mom, does winter last forever" Mom cracked open a nut and ate it Then said, "Nope kitties... not never" The kittens wide-smiled They were so happy to hear that Then they got out of the nest Where their tiny little butts sat Then, they ran down the tree To look for nuts 'neath the snow But returned to ask their mom "Mom... where do we go" Winter Is Not Forever Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros 1/25/2023

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Date: 2/19/2023 9:45:00 PM
Indeed, a great tale on the squirrel Family. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/cute~~write/story. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:18:00 AM
So sweet, Charles! And very descriptive, like a tiny movie :) Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2023 6:40:00 AM
Cute little tale Charlie. A deserved win. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 2/19/2023 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! What a cute poem from the baby squirrel's perspective. Thank you for entering your poem in my contest <3
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/19/2023 3:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for my wonderful placement, BJ. I truly appreciate you...and I am happy to know that you enjoyed it! :) Charlie
Date: 1/27/2023 1:14:00 PM
mmmmm My kind of poem ! Loved the story Charlie, it rhymed well, read easily, is charming, and told a touching story. For me, l couldn't ask more of a poem. Thank you, Enjoyed..
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Date: 1/27/2023 6:20:00 AM
A cute story ! Lovable is the squirrel family. I enjoy watching them. How long can the kittens confine themselves to the hollow of the tree...! No wonder they are excited to know that winter won't last long. All the Best Charlie....
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Date: 1/26/2023 5:25:00 PM
Enjoyed this one Charlie we have lots of fury friends around...
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Date: 1/25/2023 6:26:00 PM
This is such an expressive, appealing, well-written piece, Charles! Janice
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Date: 1/25/2023 1:39:00 PM
absolutely adorable and just right for that contest!! Thanks for your last contest, Charles
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Date: 1/25/2023 11:31:00 AM
Hello Charles, a cute poem. I wonder what the mother said. Enjoy yur day my friend.
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Date: 1/25/2023 9:02:00 AM
What a cute poem you wrote. No squirrels in Malta but I saw a few in London. Great poem. Best for a win.
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