Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

A Square Pizza Box

Round pizza, triangular slices, SQUARE box!
Uh what's wrong here, someone's a real dumb ox
A round box would be better
It would fit like a sweater
As of now it sure blows my lavender socks off!

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Judith S January 11, 2018 at 3:10 PM hmmmm .. never thought about that before. But you bring up lots of things I've never thought about before lol. Jack Ellison January 11, 2018 at 3:42 PM LOL It's my brain... surprises even me!!! LOL Lovesies xxx

Lim'Rik Flats January 11, 2018 at 8:25 AM Built like a rock it won't roll//No delivery driver to console//Square box will stay//won't get away//unless it lands in a hole. MUNCH ON JACKSON!!! (did you know "Pizza" is my favorite word?) Jack Ellison January 11, 2018 at 8:36 AM Pizza is an Italian word Momma Mia, Festavazool Might not have the spelling tight! LOL LOVE THAT STUFF CAN'T GET ENOUGH! (a bit of rhyme there, did you catch it???)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 11, 2018 at 8:09 AM Well rounded Jack, interesting points, you may have cornered a new market... Jack Ellison January 11, 2018 at 8:12 AM Yup rounding into shape today!!! LOL xxx

Silent One January 11, 2018 at 7:53 AM I think a round box would be difficult to construct... but I get your point.. Jack Ellison January 11, 2018 at 7:56 AM You think of everything!!!!!!! :)