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A Springtime Song

Soft showers fall and robins call. The scent of grass is sweet. Meadows green and saplings lean in warmth of April’s breeze. The skies are fair and in the air the lilacs’ fragrance wafts. Small buds first show, then quickly grow – delighting bees and wasps! May’s flowers beam and streamlets gleam along the mountain slopes. Colors sing and everything is life and love and hope!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/9/2019 5:31:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea, a lovely verse.
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Date: 2/9/2019 4:16:00 PM
A lovely rhyme about the hope you feel in spring, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. There were many wonderful entries to this contest and nearly all of them were difficult to rank. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/8/2012 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, nice one xx
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Date: 6/7/2012 9:40:00 PM
Andrea, awe... i like your pretty win.. especially the fair breeze coming in... congrats..pd
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:32:00 PM
Great descriptiveness...Enjoyed reading this winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:28:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2012 10:30:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Andrea. You never fail to please. Congrats!
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Date: 6/7/2012 7:41:00 AM
I love spring. Congratulations on oyur poem winning.
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Date: 6/7/2012 5:26:00 AM
lovely poem Andrea...congrats on your win
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Date: 6/7/2012 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2012 3:08:00 AM
Beautiful imagery!Congrats on your win Andrea.
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Date: 6/7/2012 1:38:00 AM
Very nice, uplifting... Congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:05:00 PM
very nice ,and thank you for you comment. My husband & I had a picnic with my little sister and her man on cinco de mayo..we really did all that..that was our cinco de mayo together.
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:11:00 PM
Andrea this one is showing up in my contest , I assume mine is in Debbies
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Date: 4/20/2011 4:29:00 AM
A fun spring song, Andrea!
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:27:00 PM
a very beautiful and warm creative piece of well written poetry. thank you commenting on A Rose Fell, glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/30/2011 2:59:00 PM
oh congrats with love for winning in this contest, andie girl.. was able to go through the whole list till now...spring becomes you..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/29/2011 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and Thank you for visiting my words and leaving yours behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/29/2011 6:41:00 PM
This beautifully flows like a bubbling brook Andrea. This is what rhyming poetry is all about and is to my liking. It is rhyming at it's best. Do this in my contest, love it. I especially like the way your final two lines sumes the whole of the poem up. Congratulations in the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:52:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest andrea, good use of internal rhyme in this very timely poem...
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:10:00 AM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:28:00 PM
Andrea - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:59:00 PM
Such lovely images woven in this rhyme Andrea. An honour to share this position with you. Warm congrats for this win.
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