A Springtime Bloom

A springtime bloom with golden hue
  Swaying 'neath clouds with fluffy plume 
 Symbols of hope and all things new
  A springtime bloom

 They dare to rise in winter's gloom
  As their trumpets come into view
 One season fades, as one's abloom

 Petals glisten with morning dew
  Weaving beauty on springtime's loom
 They always appear right on cue
  A springtime bloom

 10-27-19
 Writing Challenge - October- 2019 - Flower or Flowers Contest 
 Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
 Flower Chosen: Daffodils
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 A roundel consists of nine lines each having the same number of syllables, plus a refrain after the third line and after the last line. The refrain must be identical with the beginning of the first line: it may be a half-line, and rhymes with the second line. It has three stanzas and its rhyme scheme is as follows:  
          a b a R ;  b a  b ;  a b a R ; where R is the refrain.
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Proxenos Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations my friend - I have been off soup for about two weeks as we sold our home and had a hectic, busy and emotional time packing and unpacking - the house we sold, saw three generations pass through it and it was a very hard decision we made but we decided to downsize - my husband and I were rattling around in our previous house. I loved your poem Joseph - it has a happy ring to it - 'Symbols of hope and all things new, A Springtime bloom! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 3, 2019 at 3:16 PM
You did well and I see you have done well in the contest...
May Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Silent
La France Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Joseph congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely poem!
May Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Thank you for my placement DH..
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 8:04 PM
this is so good, Joseph. Hope it scored high. Congrats to you.
May Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 4:55 PM
what a pretty poem Joseph, I adore seeing daffodils and their golden trumpets, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Thank you Jan
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November 1, 2019 at 3:15 PM
- Congratulations Joseph, on your beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 4, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Anne
Chiri Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Joseph congrats on a wonderful win my friend! ;)
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November 4, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Brenda
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October 28, 2019 at 5:44 AM
So charming and lively..I enjoyed the happy tone in this springtime bloom. All the best, Joseph.
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October 28, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thank you Vijay
Nicole Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Beautiful in so many amazing ways. I love the way your thoughts caress the page. My heart is smiling. I shall place this in my favorites. "Symbols of hope and all things new. A springtime bloom." Exactly. :) Brandy
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October 28, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thank you Brandy, and thanks for making it a fave
Mcintosh Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Wonderful poem. Love it. God bless, Gina
May Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Gina..blessings
One Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Beautiful imagery Joseph..
May Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Silent
Aurora Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Very pretty poem to brighten up this cold and gloomy Autumn. Thank you for introducing me to the roundel also.
May Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thank you MA
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