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Expel any doubt; there's no wish to draw harrow, In the stillness, the earth is suffering all sorrow Woodlands prompts you not to be restless A lovely day has sprung from the darkness Noble pigeon sitting at the back of my desk Bright sun flows into the room below my neck Bird flock spread their wings for their initial flight They promptly sink into sight, like dazzling light Pinnacles mumble hush up, calm, and loftily Each time you pitch, the drizzle mutter softly Bliss should have shied every one of its gems falls And, the clay heed be solidly clad with botanicals Lunar light and darkness converse in a void The sun warns against gloating you might avoid Various obstacles may impede my progress Never conjecture; your edges are usualness. My throat and my flowers are seared A snowy song throngs my chilled head The blemishes are stifling the scenery. Halls prevail upon mastery and majesty Pinks had gone on while I was enthralled It is the best of a harsh hive that was soothed Nobody is frantic, and no one's heart is in agony A grin on each face, there is no longer worry.
3rd Place Contest Winner Written: February 23, 2022 A Lovely Day Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/2/2022 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with your lovely poem. Thank you for entering in this contest :) I hope you are having a lovely day!
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Date: 2/24/2022 9:11:00 PM
this is overflowing with lovely spring imagery.
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Date: 2/24/2022 3:27:00 PM
Your imagery is marvelously penned! "Noble pigeon sitting at the back of my desk Bright sun flows into the room below my neck Bird flock spread their wings for their initial flight They promptly sink into sight, like dazzling light"
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Date: 2/24/2022 3:41:00 AM
" Nobody is frantic, and no one's heart is in agony A grin on each face, there is no longer worry.".... A lovely day when everyone is enjoying a serene bliss, when no one is in frantic haste and no one has any trace of sorrow and each face is lighted up with joy ! Beautiful poem dear Lasaad !
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Date: 2/23/2022 3:00:00 PM
I would love to experience just such a spring day. Beatifully depicted, my friend. Blessings
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Date: 2/23/2022 11:56:00 AM
Enjoyed the exuberance of your write, Lasaad. Much revelry you convey through your charming descriptions. A lovely day, indeed!
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