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A Spring Drink

Gentility in a crystal sea, Soft pitter-pat on canvas tent, effervescent crescendo, purest tears of angels; terra-forma drinks holy waters, refreshing Gaia’s soul.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/2/2019 8:53:00 PM

Essence of Spirit! -- Is it available tonight?! I'll take a double shot... :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 2:20:00 AM

Anytime. Enjoy.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/1/2019 4:31:00 PM

Your imagery makes me want a drink of that magic elixir; it sounds more soulful than mere water.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 2:21:00 AM

Oh good, enjoy some.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/1/2019 2:13:00 PM

Lovely imagery, M.L. When I was a child, my mother told me raindrops were angels' tears. Beautifully penned! Best wishes, Carolyn

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 2:21:00 AM

That's beautiful. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2019 5:41:00 AM

a refreshing drink indeed ML!:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 2:21:00 AM

Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/31/2019 4:26:00 PM

'purest tears of angels' - beautiful!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 2:21:00 AM

Thanks Michelle.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/31/2019 2:17:00 PM

This drink has a spiritual splash to it that makes it even good for body and soul! - so delightfully refreshing! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Pandita.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2019 6:51:00 PM

Hello M.L.Kiser, this does sound like an interesting drink. I would like to try it, please pour me a glass. Thank you. have a nice evening my friend.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2019 5:20:00 AM

Hee, thanks Darlene.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/30/2019 4:01:00 PM

Ohhh, this is very nice. I am happy I was led to this today. :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/31/2019 5:19:00 AM

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.