Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

A Spring Day

A walk in the park
Sunny skies
Lovers hand in hand
Strolling along the promenade
Smelling the sweet scent of red roses all around
As I sit here all alone
On a park bench
Beside the most beautiful woman I ever laid eyes on
If only I was not so shy
I would have told her so

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Arlene Smith June 28, 2014 at 8:10 AM Beautiful, Arthur!.. You should have just slipped her this poem.. :-).. Hugs.. Arlene

Casarah Nance April 27, 2014 at 10:53 PM Do tell! worse comes to worse you can write another poem about it. :) btw yes very cool poem here, i enjoyed it

Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2014 at 12:46 AM This is where creativity, which most poets possess, comes in handy. You could talk about the weather, nearby scenery, even mention the color of her hair as compared to anything of beauty. Next time that happens you will find an opening I am sure. I enjoyed your poem which we can all relate to. Arthur Vaso June 28, 2014 at 9:58 AM Thanks Connie. much appreciated!!

Brooke Dylan April 26, 2014 at 9:52 PM wow Arthur,.. the honesty in this.. I can relate.. I have sat beside a good-looking man on the bus or plane and just could not talk to him... even if he talked to me,.. I would just looked at him.. thank you for a wonderful poem.. and happy spring to you B Arthur Vaso April 26, 2014 at 9:54 PM Hi there Brooke! I think we all can relate to this!!!! Thanks!

Cherl Dunn April 24, 2014 at 7:49 PM I'm flattered by your comment my dear friend but also i didn't know that one could print off copies of poem off this sight.? my computer has to restart itself so it can do up dates so i'll have to write more in a few love your poem cheri Arthur Vaso April 26, 2014 at 9:50 PM Thanks Cherl and yes you can print from here, or copy and paste. Sometimes I just find it more relaxing to read a poem on paper, not at the computer!

Harry Horsman April 23, 2014 at 11:03 AM Oh my life mirrors that Arthur,,,,this is wonderful poetry,,,not so light (as in poetry for me) i find this very emotional,,,,,, Arthur Vaso April 26, 2014 at 9:48 PM Thanks Harry, I do try!!!!

Ana Espinola Collins April 22, 2014 at 8:51 PM Such a sweet write Arthur but please talk to her next time! :) Ana Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 10:07 PM You have her number? LOL kidding

Sandra Adams April 22, 2014 at 7:02 PM You paint a lovely picture with your words....surely you can find the courage to tell her so,...lovely write :) Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:51 PM Thank you Ndaba, nice to meet you, I will come over soon to have a read! Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:48 PM If only I knew who she was!!! Thanks again Sandra for your kind words!!!

Ndaba Sibanda April 22, 2014 at 3:29 PM l can feel the sweet scent of your poem. Lovely piece. Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:56 PM Thank you Ndaba, nice to meet you, I will come over soon to have a read!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 22, 2014 at 3:14 PM hahahha.. sometime we need to take risk to know something.. :) nice read.. :) Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:51 PM Thank you for the beautiful comment!! :)

Keith O.J. Hunt April 22, 2014 at 2:31 PM One for the guys arthur.... been there many times; you expressed it perfectly! Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:53 PM Thanks Kieth, I trired!!! :) cheers

Jan Allison April 22, 2014 at 12:44 PM oh such a romantic write Arthur just a casual word is all it could take. Hugs Jan x Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:56 PM Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2014 at 2:13 AM - Enjoy the scents of red roses and spring !!! - Love it, Arthur ! - A man that blushes is better than a man who fades:))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 8:58 PM oh my what about a man who blushes and fades? :)

Eileen Manassian April 22, 2014 at 12:59 AM You.....and your shyness. Come now...do be brave...or you will be sitting on that bench for longer than you want! ;) Thanks for your wonderful praise on my latest poem....I was just so touched by the praise. It warmed my heart so so much. Hugs Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:00 PM Thanks Eileen, but its all 100% deserved!!!! I am sure you know how talented you are, but more important, its a glimpse into the nice person you are!

Tim Smith April 21, 2014 at 10:52 PM No need to be shy...worst case scenario is you would be sitting back on the bench alone...Tim Arthur Vaso April 21, 2014 at 10:58 PM Thanks Tim, seems either way that's the result!!!! But I sure had fun writing this!!!! You are by the way talking to a fellow hockey fan!!!!!! Love the playoffs!!!